|Reviews for Meet your daddy|
| JameS chapter 17 . 9/1/2013
It is really nice story
| RockaRosalie chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
cant believe she just forgave them
| nbrian72 chapter 19 . 2/29/2012
can't wait to read the sequal
| mrsjasperwhitlockcullenhale chapter 9 . 1/8/2011
you should of put ll mio cantante it means my singer la tua cantante means your singer
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 19 . 8/31/2010
this story is so good. you did a great job with it
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 9 . 8/31/2010
this is really a good story so far, i am so glad that edward and bella are back together.
| Rose Demica chapter 19 . 2/12/2010
loved the story!
| Mordanyes chapter 17 . 2/5/2010
Ok, I'm going to be truly honest. I found this very cheesy and easy to figure out what will happen. Thats an honest opinion. You got everyone all worked up about her death and then she randomly wakes up from the 'power of love'. Sorry, it's just I found that very stupid, cheesy and not worth the ending it was...
Otherwise it was a very used plot that really didn't have much of a plot! No offense intended for anything but I thought telling you straight out would be the best.
Your writing style is not very good. Not utterly horrible but not great.
My tip would be to try and make sure the plot isn't so obvious and cheesy. Also editing is a big must for any story. So maybe try that out. It actually is very good for getting readers. :)
Good luck with future writing!
Faith, LU Concritter
| esme chapter 16 . 9/26/2009
its chessy but good
| chloe chapter 12 . 9/26/2009
jacob is mean can i thought they would have mention bellas name
| chloe chapter 7 . 9/26/2009
y do they hav to wear skinny jeans y cant they b flare jeans
| Bella Marie Cullen 213 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
| Megan-Cullen123 chapter 18 . 8/3/2009
loved the story!
| simplyleah chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
ew i hate the name xavier
| veryannoyed chapter 2 . 7/11/2009