Reviews for Cracks in the Armour
avatar fan chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Nope, it's not like avatar the last airbender. Its WAY better.
AmurTiger123 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I totally agree with this story. It's awesome!
lemon-rind chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Thank you.
Thornapple chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I loved this. Azula is my favourite character, and I loved how you portrayed her. It's heartbreaking, how fragile and lonely she really is.
AMP chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
This is very good. I don't think I've ever read an Azula portrayal like this. But it is also the most like her. I commend you on this. Great work, girl.

-AMP
YfyF12 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
aw great job! _

I like these Azula redemption kind of things, since I'm sure she had feelings as well.
appa-appa-away chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Awesome stuff. I liked it.

You captured Azula's dark side perfectly. Well done!

XD

A~A~A
Toph13139 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow.. I really liked this... It's nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks Azula has... potential
Kuzon chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Fantastic, so effective in every way. This really tugs on the ol' heartstrings. Azula is definately my favourite character and you write her very well!
The One And Only Lobster chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Oh, Azula. D:

Brilliantly executed. I really loved this one. I think you are quite probably right.
wakingfire chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Love it. This is part of what I keep telling everybody-that Azula always had a worse life than Zuko ever had and that I truly pity her.

They always look at me as if I'm crazy but I'll continue to say so.
mak0-ch1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I like your take on Azula's real thoughts and feelings...Book 3 revealed a lot about her more...'humane' side...and so I've lost all hatred towards her by the end of the series and was totally disappointed that they ended it with her looking pathetic and her future a question

so i'm really happy that you're making an 'Azula redemption' thing

'everyone picks Zuko over [Azula]'...not entirely true: While Mai picked Zuko, Ty Lee picked Mai - which by the way I think is more admirable, if only a little bit, than the former since it only took Ty Lee friendship to go against Azula, while it took Mai her love for Zuko

and I'm rambling about this because I'd like to read a story centered around Mai's and Ty Lee's friendship, preferably written by you..so if you have time or if you think it's worth writing about, could you write one about it? please and thank you
Delicate Desires chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
That was an amazing story! I really liked it.
intheinkpot chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
Awesome! This was really, really good, seriously. I like how you portrayed Azula. It made her seem more human, without making her OOC. In my opinion, anyway. Defininatly faving this.
Liooness chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
yay! a human azula! loved it. great job and azula is just such an awesome villian, but i love how human she still is
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