Reviews for Tony's Evolution: Season 4 Focus
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2017
Ziva always wants to know every detail of tonys life even after she dug up his files for her brother she treated him like shit 24/7 since day one of her time on the shitty show
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
Good thing Tony wasn't/isnt sick.

Just working undercover for the Director.

At least he has such concerned friends/boos to worry about him though.
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
i likey! :)

this is so going in my favs
luckyducky09 chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Excellent story I hope you continue
Doc Orlando chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
Nice character interaction and continuation of scenes.

crokettsgirl chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
I had always wanted them to go deeper into Tony's changed behavior. In one episode Ziva is with Ducky at the bar and trying to call Tony over and over again with no answer. Ducky says something to her about over concern, the impression I got was that she is in love with Tony. But Tony was with Jeanne. They showed bits and pieces of concern from the team, but I would have like to see more. Of course Gibbs found out some of it but the rest too late.

I like how you're doing this, mixing the real part of the show with more of a look at Tony's behavior. Excellent idea. I'm going to read the second part. Sue
rednebdnim chapter 2 . 6/29/2008
I can't believe how much your story describes what I have been thinking about "Season 4 Tony".

I'm looking forward to your take on the end of the season.
FrostyFingers chapter 2 . 6/29/2008
more! this is good. tony's really been secretive all the time. maybe he should open up to gibbs now?
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Hmph...he should have felt guilty about the way he treated Ziva the whole SEASON.


Good story.

Will there be more, I hope?
WBH21C chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
GREAT Start!
T'Kath chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Yeah, well done. Good capture of characters, especially Gibbs concern... write more of it
shirik chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
loved it!