|Reviews for Humanity's Last Hope-Orginal|
| mr.potato chapter 2 . 4/18
still love it
| mr.potato chapter 1 . 4/18
I love how descriptive you are but if the united states declared war on the world they would win after 38 years so...
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/2/2016
Again, good story, but PLEASE do a spell-check.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/2/2016
Great story, but the spelling made me cringe
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/1/2016
Wow. Cliffhanger much?
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/1/2016
hahaha that "joke" well its not a joke
and I like the "When life gives you lemons, squirt them in someone's eyes and kick them in the balls."
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/1/2016
good... i prefer mark unchanged :P
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/1/2016
electrocuted means KILLED with electricity, not just shocked. right? am I wrong
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/1/2016
"So... bring you to my humbly small electrified cage?"
ROFL best line here
| Guest chapter 35 . 7/31/2016
Wtf happened to this epic story? Ends on huge cliffhanger.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/31/2016
Me: "Oh,they're just using those bunkers"
Loudspeaker: "For the glory of Germany!"
Me: "Oh thats something else"
| Aragami Hiroshima La Luminite chapter 35 . 9/4/2015
If you're evil for tormenting your characters, then what am I for killing mine off?
Emily be cra-zzzzzzzzyyyyyy.
Don't fight the love Evons. Embrace it. Feeeel it in your soul.
I forgot about Dave and Anna too.
Did Carly break the fourth-wall? That's my job!
Enough with the bs. I should say from a humor stand-point I prefer the original story to the new one, but the new one seems to be better crafted and experience. I like the idea of Mark turning into a morph, yes, but the fact that the morphs that apear in this story are a limited number (I think at max, there's 20 different pokemon speices mentioned through the whole thing) it makes seeing him as a Vulpix less creative. Yada yada, I don't think you want to hear from me of all people with this being a dead-fic but I just wanted to read it seeing that I'm still waiting on the update for the present one. I'll shut up now. Gj.
Live, Love, Learn. Light's out.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Also sorry about the bad comment typing on a broken ipod also plz someone make stories in this world hell maybe finish this story since he's not around and could give less of a care it's been 3 years like come if he cared he would of finished it but he didn't so its not special to he lied this is nothing him so were safe to make or finish this story or make more with no sex screens
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Well everyone it appears that this story will never be finished unless someone is up for the challenge i mean he can't sue i guess cause you know he forgot about this and died or he doesn't care anymore like come people finish where he left off just make sure to link and sex in it either hell make a new story in this world
| Aragami Hiroshima La Luminite chapter 10 . 8/30/2015
In real life? Yes, I'd paid that much for an actual Vulpix! I mean, c'mon!
Second, a few chapters of my friend GENISYS' story 'Pokemon One-Shots'. Humans are Pokemorphs' pets there. *Sips coffee* I also forgot to make a joke back in the Euro chapters when you typed "incest" instead of "insect". Back to the story.