Reviews for Sight of Sacrifice
Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
i DID not get that at ALL. where is she? what happened? great job, very scary!
vivid.daydreamer chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Disturbing... very disturbing...

But i like it :)

Your a great writer
Ms. Marauder-Cullen chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
That was...intense. There is no other word for this.
Mallory Marvel chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Shit, that was freaky. And weird. And horrific really. I loved it. Well written and btw horror is way better when you read it. I never knew this, thanks!
InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Oh wickedly grisly. I love this kind of stuff.

Favorite line (just eww and provocative but so damn cool): A woman, her mouth open an inch from mine, cracked yellow and black teeth and a white tongue, her face like cement, so thin, and she bellowed silently.
Were-VampGirl chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
oo-ee ca-coo-ee, scary stuff. was that Your dream?
bubblez-x chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Wow, this story is the first horror story/one shot I've read. I normally don't bother reading or watching anything to do with horror because it doesn't affect me in any way, more often than not I just find it funny, but this was really good. For me the best kind of horror is disturbing, freaky horror full of suspence and in a way this had them all. The bodies and the voice covered the disturbing and freaky bits but the whole thing of it being a nightmare created the suspence. Why was she having this nightmare, what's it really about, when will she wake up? Any stories that creates questions like that creates suspence for me and intrigues me. Although the questions are left unanswered I think that's better because it leaves me to dwell on the story and create my own theories. Really good and has left me with a good impression on horror stories, I hope there are more as good as this out there!
shnapperdoodlez chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
holy shit. That is extremely intense.

i really really love it.
RosieWilde chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Wow. And I mean WOW. This is seriously powerful stuff. I do not shy away from gruesome imagery and you certainly have some here. Anguish, pain, description - wonderfully done. There is definitely a certain beauty to suffering and I really feel it in this story. Ambiguous enough to pique my curiosity but strong enough to knock me flat regardless. 10/10. I don't give full marks very often ;)
I'm Randomspicuous chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
soo...its a dream... rather freaky but good... where was eddie?
Lizzie Hopscotch chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
its wondefully written but as disturbing as hell.

Nice one!

Much hugs

Lizzie Hopscotch
ishha chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
... Creeppy... Great writing though :D
CC244 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Very well written and awesome!
Topaz Ki chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Wow, that is really disturbing...
Morbidmuch chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Very haunting, and very good. The voice sort of reminded me of The Gnarl from season 7 of Buffy the vampire slayer, and that made it extra creepy for me
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