Reviews for Near Misses
Joanne chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Sai came back.

I'm glad!

Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it very much.
sweetyamiyugigirl chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
-bonks head on table- You IDIOT HIKARU! though... That does (Sadly) kind of sound similiar to what he might have done...
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Sai's back? Yay!


Thank you Waya for getting there when you did...

Well written!
StormBrisingr chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Sai's baack! YAY
Cheska chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
ooh really? Sai came back? I'm glad! And relieved!
SerenDPetty chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
zeynel chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Love this! Please, do continue it! I'd really would love it! _
Pure Shikon chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Yay! You should totally continue this! The Go World's reaction: "Go-pro Shindou 1-dan first resigns 5 games and then is found Dieing in Bathtub After an Attempted Suicide!" That would get the papers selling. Great story!
min chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
you shoould definately continue
Schermionie chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Interesting... I think.

Truly, I didn't really notice that Sai had come back, and merely thought that Hikaru was looking where Sai would usually have been and seeing only empty space. Would have been sad, but I like that Sai returned. It was really unexpected, and I love Sai.

One thing that really bothered me was the question of the whereabouts of his parents. Were they away at this time? It's been so long that I don't remember, but surely there would be some kind of phone call from them?

The attempted suicide bothered me a bit too, but it was certainly a unique way to get Sai back in terms of what I've read before. What I actually liked about it is that you didn't dwell too long on the angsty stuff and you made Hikaru get over this quite quickly. I felt that was a good attitude and that it really rang true, if you see what I mean.

Anyway, this isn't bad, and if you ever feel like continuing it, hopefully I'll be able to read what you've written. It'd be nice to see a longer chapter where you could truly demonstrate your skills, as I can tell that you are good writer.

Finally, I need to ask your permission to do something... I've had the second chapter planned out for my new story for months, but it's also called "Near Misses". Do you mind if I still use that title?

Thanks very much! I hope to see more HikaGo stuff from you in the future.
Senna chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Yay! Sai came back for Hikaru! I really liked this story and hope that the mood strikes you to continue it! Great job!