|Reviews for Hole|
| FireFriday chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
| Sxcsami chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
hey awesome story i really like and seth is my fave character so plz plz plz finish it and dont just stop like everyone else 5\5 XXX
| The Phantom Dragon chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
it's Czech Helga's talking and are u gonna finish this
| Molleyn chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
I agree with spacing things up more, every new line in a dialogue should be on a new line:
...instead of "So?" "Yeah!"
That makes it SO much easier to read.
| Say No Evil chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Hm...I think you should update, but don't write so fast and space things out a little more the rest of the story if you plan to continue. But I think you're a good writer, so come on. UPDATE! :)
| nebulalightspeed chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
me like. hope you keep writing