Reviews for Me and You
Ja9 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Mmm. . .compared to the romance novels out on the market? This is not graphic at all. I really liked the fact that you made this a real first time experience story. I really hate it when people write about a girl sleeping with someone for the first time and it's all fine and dandy after you get over the pain. The fact that Alicia had to accustom herself to the pain for a few moments really made that moment real for me. And I appreciate that. I also appreciate that this is Alicia/Rufus smut. I love this pairing. They're so cute! I thank you for this fic.
Angelus Erreare chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Ellow there! Nah; it wasn't graphic at all! It was on the naughtier side of naughty but it wasn't filthy! It was filled with...WAFF, which I usually associate with first times seeing that that time usually has anxiety, nervousless, aloofness etc etc.

On the whole, it was nicely done and well-written. Usually, I don't read PWP, unless it was well-written. And this fic definitely fits the bill!

Keep writing!

Take Care

Amaterasu chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Want more of this hardcore stuff

I like your writing style :)
kallmered chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I'm not sure if i've reviewed this yet, for this is the second time i've read this, but BRAVO! i love it! And no, a little bit of alicia/rufus smut is quite healthy and appreciated. They're such a rare couple to find in fanfiction.

Thanks for the read!
Razer Athane chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Good fic. And it wasn't 'that' graphic, lol. I've seen worse o.o But this was good, it was sweet :)
Beezie chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I liked the smut, it was needed after all the tension in the game. I haven't beat the game yet, but I'm glad to also find some more Alicia and Rufus stories, I'm surprised there are so few. Props.
Amanthya chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
You've certainly got the awkwardness of the first time, Alicia's awakening desires and Rufus's self-doubting mixed with a need for touch down nicely. You're right, there isn't enough RuxAli smut, but that's probably b/c the couple's so sweet it's hard to imagine. This is like Rufus's wet-dream or something, but it's great. _
RomanticPrincess chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
You are SO right! There is not enough Rufus x Alicia smex out there!

After reading this oneshot I can't help but wonder how old Rufus really is. For all we now he could be over 500 years old! And Alicia really does look like a doll with those blue eyes and the way she acts and speaks just makes me wanna glomp her -
100-series chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Rufus is really cute in this fic. It's true that he's older than Alicia, they never really say how much older, either. He could be hundreds of years old (probably not, though). But, he seems very childlike to me especially in the scenes where he thinks the seal stone is the dragon orb, or when he's poking the wall in Bifrost. I like how this fic, from Rufus's angle, makes it seem like he knows what he's doing and he feels terrible about it; but if we had more of a fly-on-the-wall perspective (or maybe we were viewing it as Alicia) he would look very innocent and even silly. I want to give him a big hug.

That was my way-too-deep review! In short, good job.
FridayFrige chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Wow, we must really think alike. The last line is almost exactly like one from a fic that I never finished.

What's happening is pretty graphic, but it's not like you described genetalia in graphic detail or anything. I hope the moderators don't delete it. _ I think it was tasteful. Except for maybe all the f-bombs, haha. Although it's not completely in like with the game, I think if VP2 was an R-rated movie, Rufus would probably drop those a lot.

ANYWAY. About the actual story. I am really impressed with someone approaching the pain factor of first times without making it porno-ridiculous. That and not having everybody orgasm repeatedly. Although Alicia, despite her meekness, is a fighter and would have a substantially high pain threshhold, it does at least make things uncomfortable. I think that it's an excellent way of highlighting the characters instead of just writing smut and inserting character A and B's names (which is more like what I end up doing, which is why I never post anything). Although there's no set-up to show how they got into this situation (I always fumble on that part too, haha) Rufus acting like a clown while on the inside he's thinking about what a terrible terrible person he is hits the mark for him, I think.