|Reviews for Beauty Within|
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
Those sons of a bitches. I hate them more now then I did. KILL DE CONS!-Gathers an army of angered Bumblebee fans with laser blasters-
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Oh man I'm likeing this. Write more.
| sinister muffin chapter 8 . 12/23/2008
When I try to find the perfect word to describe your fic, 'wow' is the first that comes to mine. 'Perfect' is the second. Most fics are just trash; fluffy PWP. Every time I read a new chapter, I remember why I come back to fanfiction. Beauty Within holds so much raw emotion, its incredible. The emotions felt by each character aren't forced upon you, I can feel Bumblebee's sadness, Ironhide's grief, and Droct’s love for Bumblebee. A good story can show you everything without telling you. It lets you imagine and think for yourself. The dialog between characters is lovely. As far as grammar goes, I believe you're doing very well. I can't wait 'till the next chapter comes up. All-in-all, keep up the good work!
| HyperFox3176 chapter 8 . 12/21/2008
no dont stop. the story is just getting good. cant wait for bee to get his sight back to show that he dose not care what Droct looks like.
| Nos482reborn chapter 8 . 12/6/2008
very interesting story so far hope continue soon, seems well written and detailed, with a bit of mystery thrown in on trying to judge by personality who the mystery bot could be
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 8 . 11/24/2008
This story is really branching out now.
It's getting better with each chapter!
| Witch08 chapter 8 . 11/24/2008
Whoa! Inferno was Cliffjumper's partner! That was a surprise! Well I can't wait to see both of their faces!
| Anhai chapter 8 . 11/23/2008
I read this story before the plagiarism fiasco, and I loved it. A lot. Droct is adorable and I love your writing and how you portray feelings and scenes.
I was ecstatic to see this again, and I still love it. The extra details really help. The only thing I notice the really bugs me, and I don't remember if this was in the version I read or not, are the chapter lengths. I don't mind short chapters and I'm not trying to sound like I'm demanding epic length updates, but the chapters seems a bit too short to me. It's like I blink and the chapter's over. It just makes it hard for me to really enjoy the story because everything seems...choppy and jarring, I suppose.
I still love it, though, don't get me wrong. I'm really not trying to offend you or anything. It's just something I noticed and I thought I should mention. I love the story and the writing, and thank you for continuing to post and write.
| Library Drone SAR chapter 3 . 11/17/2008
Well I just got arownd to rereading this and it's not bad overall. I'm not sure how I feel about what your doing with ironhide. But I think the sectioins with bee and droct are better. The quality of your writting has been improving.
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 7 . 11/16/2008
It's a different story now,
You can't compare it to the orginal as you've made Ironhide apart of the plot now.
It's getting more interesting as more chapters are being posted.
| Witch08 chapter 6 . 11/12/2008
poor 'hide! just wait till he gets fixed up though! and i can't wait till he and 'bee reunite! i can't wait to see his face!
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 6 . 11/11/2008
Wow, that is such a powerful chapter.
I really don't know how you could make this a better chapter.
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
I love Ironhide's Freeze cannon!
I want one!
| Witch08 chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
poor 'hide. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out the truth. this is turning out better than the first version! update soon!
| anathematize chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
i think hell be pissed next