|Reviews for Steele Keeping Secrets|
| Madeleine Gilbert chapter 5 . 6/30/2008
Great payoff! You've done an excellent job in tying up the ends of the very believable case. I love the way the relationship dynamics in the case had parallels to the Steele's relationship. That's the way a good writer adds depth.
The second-to-last line made me laugh out loud.
| shanabear chapter 5 . 6/27/2008
Great story and very sweet. I would have love to see him explain the second set of lock picks.
| Madeleine Gilbert chapter 2 . 6/25/2008
Good: a two-strand plot, i.e., professional and personal problems, connected to one source (Laura's prior relationship).
And a nicely observed character note about Remington's "hiding behind biting sarcasm". Love it.
| Madeleine Gilbert chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I always enjoy your stories in this universe...and love to watch you unfold a plot.
Excellent scene transitions in the chapter - nice "cuts" - and spot-on characterizations (especially liked the "it could go either way" line with regards to the blonde clerk).