|Reviews for Tattoo|
| T chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
This wasn't thought out through the whole way, and it wasn't very fluffy. I was hoping you would tone down on the lyrics and add in more emphasis on the emotions. Plus, Draco doesn't seem like he regrets cheating on Harry at all. And Harry wouldn't take Draco back so quickly just because he missed him- how would he know that he an trust Draco again?
You can also improve by italicising the lyrics to make it look more prominent. Giving a look over at the fic before publishing would help you. Over all, it was fairly nice, but you can still do better! Keep writing, I hope you take this as constructive criticism.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
shouldnt of made them get back together as draco cheated!
| lenisa chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
draco seems like a slut! I thought that you could have shortened down the song and put more emotional detail in,
| insertwittyandrandomnamehere chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
omg. this had me tearing up .. no joke lol. i hate break-ups ):
| rachacha chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I didn't like it. -.-
Sorry, but why would Harry take him back? There was no explination, nothing!
| Nozomi -dono chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
That was really half thought out. And what kind of fluff starts out as someone cheating- a warning would have been nice.
| Julie chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
| animewiccan725 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
aw! that was really good! very cute! i loved it!
| glitterball chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Draco never even apologised and now they're back together? What?
| njferrell chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Draco cheated and had no remorse when caught.I think Harry deserves more then a song as an apology.