Reviews for Silver Lining
dragonmystery4 chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Could you please make a new chapter? This is a really good story!
Kreyana chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
Same as last one. Better than Snowflakes, but needs its own bit if shining (the end scene... definitely.) Good points and bad points through it all, but still definitely better.
Kreyana chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Not sure if you're aware, or even checking reviews for this one, but... well... I started with 'Snowflakes', and there are several things that I find to be horribly wrong with the rewrite. One of them is definitely that most of what is in this first chapter is better than the 2nd version...

Also, haven't gotten to it here yet, but the intimate scene? I'd suggest "researching" through the fic "Foolish For You" by 0-mirage-0 (very good 'research'...*has to shake attention back here* ahem... you can find an easy link on my profile, it is the Currently Reading link.). The scene in "Snowflakes" feels a bit... coarse, and perhaps 'plastic'. Sooo, yup... Not sure what Snowflakes have to do with the story yet, but I do see how Silver Lining could fit in. And "Sara Lee" makes me think of bread...
AppleBeesWax chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
I'm just starting to read this, and I FRIGGIN ABSOLUTELY LOVEEEEE IT! :D 3.
bells chapter 12 . 9/1/2014
yes please finish it.. i woud really love to know what will happen.. thanks!
lilpopsplash chapter 13 . 8/3/2014
Kool- I'm ready for it. Can't wait for the update
snowcoloredwolf chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
thank god I printed this story out are you going to delete it?
Shadowcat203 chapter 12 . 6/25/2014
Rewrite it! This story is PERF! I love the idea!
Fan of Fiction chapter 12 . 6/21/2014
PLEEEAAASEEE! Tell me were I can find the rewritten story! I am going insane of curiosity!
hopful chapter 12 . 5/21/2014
please do
Paperflowers101 chapter 12 . 5/20/2014
Guest chapter 12 . 4/17/2014
you should re-write it and keep going with this story. it is very good.
PSML chapter 12 . 4/6/2014
Yes! Yes! Re-write it! I'm dying to know what happens!
SecretlyAngryMio chapter 12 . 3/8/2014
Please do!
Magic Freak chapter 12 . 2/24/2014
Please update this story...I love it :)
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