Reviews for Late Dawnings
Anonymous chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
A streak of black? Isn't Max's wing's brown and tawny? Or is it just the speed wise? Thanks! Awesome fanfic! :)
thestupidgenius1123 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I LOVED THAT. I almsot don't want to keep reading because who knows if you even read these? You last updated in 08, for God's sake!

But it's so good...

I'm gonna go ahead and indulge in what I shouldn't...

gypsyprincess94 chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
huh :) that was really good!
1LovesLatin3 chapter 4 . 8/12/2008
i want 2 know wa happens

i think that max should let fang be co capitan
quirtys chapter 4 . 8/12/2008
i really LOVE your story! please update soon!
sillygirlinasillyworld chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
this is the most realistic max ride fanfic ever, seriously!

i really like the bit where they kinda explained themselves

the only thing that was a bit picklish (especially since it was in third person {which i love! don't change that.}) was that i suppose the flock weren't as funny, you know? the way they say stuff and so on. perhaps a smidgeon more bananabrain would be helpful.

really like the way you're going!

two wings/thumbs up :)
xsodapopx7 chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
that was really good and sper funny!

ppost another chapter soon please.

Snowy Ashes chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
aw... that's adorable. i'm intrigued by the "romantic sparring"- that sounds like it could get, well, INTERESTING... :D

anyway, PLEASE write more ASAP...

~Snowy Ashes~
Books Are A Girl's Best Friend chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
haha. i luv this story. its great. update as soon as you can.
Lawmpy chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
It think it's good and well written. You did a good job of keeping Max and Fang in character, but there really wasn't anything great or spectacular to set it apart from any of the any other fan-fics like it, other than you did a better job than most with chapter size, being in character, and not having it be all fluff. I think the story itself has yet to get it's own personality. It's still rather good though.

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