Reviews for In the Sun
Sonny13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Yeah, it's pretty good. Your an amazing writer. Sad that April died. poor Griffin.:I
BrIdGeT-tsuchi chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Tat was really gud!

really
TheLovingCake chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Loved it! Very touching :')
FlyingHampsterOfDoom chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
You used such a great song for this fic (it's one of my favs.) and you wove it into the story beautifully- none of that 'I'm going to have the exact same thing in the song happen in my story!' And believe me, it is most definitely appreciated. And the story was really well written, as well. Just, all around good job.
Michellesdaughter chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Love it! Perfect fit. :D
Schyzotypal X chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Long Depressed Slightly Wistful Sigh...

Why do all you female Griffin love interest character's die at the end? Sad but well written, nice going.
werewolfness chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Oh my word... that is the saddest, most sadistic depressing thing I have ever read. I loved it! lol. You had a little switch from third person to first person, and it confused me, but I loved the death scene and how he couldn't help her. As a matter of fact, I love tragedies. Tragedies rule.

And the last line was very haunting. It makes me hate Millie a little less. :D
M J Rosemary chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Brillient. You captured Griffin's emotions brilliently. I loved that little bit at the end, with Millie looking like April. I hope you write more jumper fic, there isn't enough out there.