|Reviews for Choices|
| SpecialK199 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Oh this was lovely.
You've captured all the characters perfectly, it was absolutely fantastic ... and I get to read more. I've been saving Across the Airwaves for last, because it's the longest. You'll have to forgive me if I don't review every chapter of it though. For one thing, you'll get sick of hearing from me, and I'm worried that it might come across as ... well ... stalkerish! LOL
It's great getting the chance to sit down and work my way through someone's portfolio. I've got a great sense of your writing style, and am wallowing in the joy of it. Wonderful stuff, it's great!
| nuageblanc chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
Really powerful emotions! Wonderful! Continue to write stories such as this one!
| JenRar chapter 6 . 8/23/2008
*sigh* Great story! :)
| Aldara Gaea chapter 6 . 8/12/2008
*sigh* I can't wait to read Breaking Dawn. That was wonderful-you made my waiting a little easier :D
| JenniferC77 chapter 6 . 8/11/2008
I was so sorry to see this end. You did an extraordinary job representing Edward's pain during the transformation. I especially loved the imagery of them sharing her soul. He sees her so beautifully.
This is lovely. Jenn.
| Katurr chapter 6 . 8/9/2008
I loved this story. You write great in all POVs, and I can't wait to read your other stories!
I especially enjoyed seeing how you imagined Bella's transformation. It was very creative.
Keep up the fantastic work!
| White.Delicacy chapter 6 . 8/7/2008
awesome, simply awesome
of course u had to have emmett and jasper involved in a bet at some point :P
i found it funny wen edward destroyed his watch, and alices reaction
too bad u decided not to continue this, its really good, no huge drama or anything, i like that
| Krystal chapter 4 . 7/30/2008
you write so beautifully! please keep writing, because otherwise I will be incredibly sad lol :)
| Anonamouse1 chapter 6 . 7/29/2008
Oh, wow. Perfect. I love how you didn't put in the "First night" as the first chapter. Way too many other stories do, so this was a welcome relief. I love how you portrayed the characters, and how you captured the emotion and passion between Edward and Bella. Wow, honestly.
| Thalia Simon chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
ah! you're so amazing!
this was awesome.
| PepeSilvia chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This is amazing! I love it :)
| JMEM1 chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
This was great! One of the best stories I've read where Bella becomes a vampire. Very similar to what I would imagine would be written in the 4th book. Fantastic job! :D
| Lauren chapter 6 . 7/14/2008
Amazing. Simply amazing.
| darcy13 chapter 6 . 7/13/2008
A really good depiction of Bella's change. Looking forward to reading your one-shots and future stories.
| darcy13 chapter 5 . 7/13/2008
I love the last line of this chapter-"Red was suddenly my new favorite color." Perfect!
You wrote Edward very well-how that boy can torture himself! But, that's part of the reason we love him so much.
And Bella knew that at one point he'd blame himself and try to run. I thought what Emmett said to him was endearing.
You did a great job of showing how slowly timed moved for Edward during the three days of her transformation. It wasn't about the days, or even the hours, literarlly it was watching seconds go by. Terrific job.