Reviews for Good Job
athousndblossoms chapter 1 . 9/11
I finally read some honest dirty smut. I kinda hate it when writers only make soft limes. This was really hot and inspires me to upload some really filthy fanfic I've been working on. Thabk you so much
Hey chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
That last sentence is creepy
XxAccelWolfxX chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Omg eww
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
i never thought hiashi is fine with that hahahahaha oh well let's look at the bright side, they could obtained an heir after that intimate moments between neji and hinata hahaha so hot...
Last Laugh chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
It was funny. Hot clamshell made me laugh. As did sap.
pwincess69 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013

Only nejihina cud get tat hawt! And...Good Job urself!
tr chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
HAHAHHAHA BUSTED DAMN. tom peepin old man
kandita chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Very erotic and funny at the end...I love it
Mangajuicexd chapter 1 . 7/24/2011

Hiashi in the end cracked me up! I didn't expect it... :D
worldreminiscence chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
WTD(what the duck, yes duck.)! XDDD

So Hiashi's TOTALLY FINE with that? XD And I can't believe it, HE JUST PEEKED using byakugan... U sly Hiashi-grandpa LMAO!

I was laughing so HARD hahaha u made my day! XD

TwistedFaith5 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Ooooooo! That was HOT! haha

Hope you make more!:)
Loving-Chakra chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
well, I'm a little confused about the last part. What did Hiashi mean?

very good all in all. chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
hehe cant hide from Hiashi! nice one
xxbochixx chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
hehe, nice! :D this is awesome! hehe Hiashi saw them! XD
Hyzenthly chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
I laughed a lot. Just the way he just "tsk tsk"s as if its really no big deal made me b urst out laughing. Good job! [did you see my bad pun there? Cos the story name is... Never mind XD]
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