Reviews for Past Tense
Tropp chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Apparently this is quite an old story but since you are still active I thought that a "review" or at least a few comments might be in order anyway. First of all, love the fact that it's just one chapter/page - makes it a lot easier when reading on an older phone (reading fanfiction is my favourite way of passing time while commuting by public transport). Second, love the story - the plot idea is fantastic and you managed to make the most of it. Third, sex scenes are sometimes neccesay to convey a feeling and make a story complete but more often then not they are either very cheesy or porn but you managed to make it a natural part of the story - impressive. The ability to integrate sex scenes in a story without turning things into porn is where the written word still excel.
Thisissocliche chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
This was so very awesome. And cute. I loved reading it :)
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I haven't gotten very far in the Voyager series yet but considering Jeri Ryan I say it's safe to read these fics. Great fic!
Brenda chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Great story, great pairing, hope you'll write more J/7 stories.
deltaquadangel chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Seven of Nine meets the Terminator. Nicely done.
cygirl1 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
I do love Trek time travel stories. This one is one of the best.