Reviews for Shhh
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Tuvok ruined the moment!... He did save them though but still
supasoph chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Can we have 'later'?
juanitalozano chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Hello, I enjoyed your story (not happy that they had to indure such pain)...You made it work...Thank You for sharing your wonderful talent...Juanita from Texas*
dawnm chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Short and sweet. Nice work. I have to agree with many of the other reviewers...it is more effective without the addition of sex. The way you have written it seems so much more heartfelt and sincere. Thanks for sharing it.
deltaquadangel chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Beautiful!
fawn1963 chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Beautifully written. This story may be short but it conveys so much emotion. I believe that including "sex" would have distracted from the story and lessened the impact.
Courtlynn D chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
It's very creative. I really like what you did with the story. It was very sweet and touching.
Lolita22 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
First reaction: aw.. that is so sweet.

Constructive reaction: this story is a study in how to use small gestures to convey beautifully complex emotions to the reader.

You said you wished you could have used sex in this story, but in my opinion, it would have been completely superfluous, and would actually have taken away from the simplicity of the story. Again, in my own humble opion, emotions, expressed in the simplest ways, can be more powerful than any sex scene.

Nice work!
cygirl1 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
So much emotion put into such a short story. BRAVO!