Reviews for A New Life
Guest chapter 34 . 8/6/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY BUT IM
Jiggaly-Ribbs chapter 34 . 8/1/2016
So I just spent the whole day reading this...! I love it soooo much and I can't wait for the next installment. And seriously is Harry ever going to give it up? Sirius is being awesome by the way either way but seriously SEXXXXX.
Lulumo chapter 17 . 8/1/2016
Hmm... they're talking about trust (especially between Harry and James) and yet they never told Harry about being Animagi not invited Harry to become Animagus with them... I understand at the start but now even Harry knows about Remus being Werewolf and yet didn't invite Harry to 'full moon party'...
AmantedelFemAU chapter 34 . 7/31/2016
Hello, excuse my English is not my native language, I love your story, but I'd really like Harry change things for the better, saving those who had a life or death unjust and unnecessary.

About Severus, I imagined that he would join the Order if Lily and Harry are in danger of death in the first instance, in turn, created Regulus would also join Severus as a spy if Harry is in danger, but I remember bad , with the charisma of Harry, many people move off to save and even help because it has "many friends" everywhere. As you entered the code in a chapter.

I would much rather see (read) the reaction of other characters before marriage Potter / Black, especially parents of Sirius, Regulus, Severus, and why not, of Rabastan too. Only to enjoy it better.

Another thing, if the prophecy indicates that it is about a child born in late July that should not include Harry? It is that birthday (true, no?) and created that Voldemort would suspect it and would ask the Death Eaters who were friends of Harry if anyone knows what day it was born and when he finds out he might come to the conclusion that Harry is the chosen one . Well, it's what I think, in the end it is your decision.
leylinjan chapter 34 . 7/25/2016
This was so sweet! And funny! And lovely... Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. Hope there'll be more of it :)
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2016
I am enjoying reading this story I hope you go all the way to seventh year
ciambella chapter 34 . 7/19/2016
I found this story a couple of days ago and I couldn't stop reading it. I'm really in love with it! The whole 'Harry goes back in time and is a relative of James' is not really an unseen concept, but here it's viewed in an original perspective, and I really loved the idea of the merging of the "two" Harrys' personalities. I loved that Harry hasn't revealed his past (future?) identity and that he has experienced the war as a normal civilian rather than the Boy-Who-Lived, for a change. I really enjoyed their Hogwarts years, the relationships between all the PottersJames as a brother was adorable and Charlus and Dorea were lovely, their death was sad though expected -, the friendships between Harry and people from all Houses, especially RegulusI really do hope he will survive, as well as the Potters, please don't kill them! And then Sirius and Harry, they are so cute, and now engaged! I'm so excited about it! I'm so curious about how this story will develop, who Harry's unknown father actually is, and if the prophecy will apply. Is it even the same as the previous one? After all Severus here isn't in love with Lily anymore, would he turn sides because of her anyway? I can't wait for the next chapters, sorry for the rambling, hope you will update soon!
HeilHydra chapter 16 . 7/15/2016
To be honest, as much as I love Harry's character here, I don't see how he could end up with Sirius. It's already chapter 16, and Sirius's character has not shown any redeeming characteristics for which Harry could fall. I'd be more likely to believe this would end with Harry with Severus than Harry with Sirius (even Harry with Remus is more plausible than the his being with Sirius). Personally, I also don't like Sirius's character, so I do admit I am biased in this review. No matter, I could not help but comment my thoughts on the endgame pairing. I'd also like to highlight that there were many grammatical errors right from the beginning, but don't worry much if many commenters use this as an excuse for a negative review, for these errors didn't hinder my reading on to where I am now. Moving on, I was interested in this fic, but I do also admit my interest has waned a bit. I'll continue to read, of course, but I'd like to comment these thoughts before moving onwards.

Cheers.
Ali-Paoli chapter 27 . 7/6/2016
Lol. I noticed the "preposition" too, but I just found it endearing, really. Ahhh! Everything is getting so out of hand! Btw, I'm still kind of in denial about Harry not being the "Boy-Who-Lived" here. It's just so weird for me to see him not being in the dead-center of the war! On that note, very worried for James's and Lily's futures. Though, again, Denial of not just a river in Egypt; and mine is so ginormous and long coming that I'm having quite some trouble letting go-like those long seated infections that bind themselves to the liveliness of their hosts and you really can't have one without the other (ha! ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)) Anywho, thanks so much sour writing this brilliant wonderful thing! ;)
Ali-Paoli chapter 24 . 7/6/2016
Dun dun duuuuun! And the plot thickens... (This is too good, honestly; thank you so much for writing it!)
Ali-Paoli chapter 22 . 7/6/2016
Sirius, you sly dog! Ahh! I'm so excited for next chapter, eep! Thanks for writing!
Ali-Paoli chapter 21 . 7/6/2016
Wow. This just keeps getting better and better! I honestly don't know what to say; except maybe thank how much I love Love LOVE this! Thank you so much for writing it!
Ali-Paoli chapter 16 . 7/5/2016
Aww yeah! This is developing so nicely-I can't even put down my phone! I really do love this story so much and appreciate greatly the amount of effort you clearly put into this. O can honestly say there has not been one thing-not a single element, event or development- in this story that I have not wholeheartedly agreed with. I still love this; thank you so much for writing this!
Ali-Paoli chapter 11 . 7/5/2016
Okay, sooo... I'msorryIwaiteduntilchaptereleventoleaveacommentexpressinghowmuchIlovethistory! It's wonderful; and, not unique, but original and so brilliant where other fail to develop the trope of Harry going back to/ reincarnating in the Marauders' Era. (Especially for the SiriusHarry pairing.) You have giving me everything I could have possibly hoped for in a story like this and everything I couldn't bear ask for because so little writers can give what you do. You've met why expectation I could possibly have had in the eye, and then proceed to go above and beyond it. This story had the potential to become a personal favorite above many, MANY other Sirry fics I've read so far; and the romance isn't even there yet! But, most of all, I have loved your accurate and agreeable characterization of characters that are usually concurrently ignored in fics of this type. All in all, this is an outstanding piece of work; and, while I can't promise to comment on every single chapter, I sure as hell won't be shy at all with that little Review button! Thank you so much for writing this! Kudos to your username as well.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/24/2016
And now I'm rereading this! It's just so good! I love everything about James and Harry's relationship, and the James and Sirius friendship is so fun! I love watching Harry interact with the Marauders, and I love the Marauders and Harry and Lily when they're older! It's all so cute! Can't wait for more! Oh, that last review wasn't mine - you have two guest admirers of your works! Ooo and none of us can stand the wait - your entire fan base sits on the edge of our seats!
2,297 | « Prev Page 1 .. 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 21 .. Last Next »