|Reviews for A New Life|
| Mirage chapter 28 . 10/25/2017
i think Harry makes a wrong move in ch28, with accepting dumbledores offer with his burning chicken Club...
how can Harry say in the Meeting with the healer that he is crring and stays neutral...when he goes on dumbles side...i think the DRK and light side do it wrong, they have so rarely a magical child...most Family only have one or two...and with a war more and more will die...
so every magical Person is important...and i think when they would marry muggleborn with halfbloods or low class poorblood they could get a new stronger Generation of magical children who then can make the old leading pureblood Familys strong and healthy (and sane ) again... and then mix here and there and you get more halfbloods and purebloods in the next years...
then more and human right and respect for creatures...
some old Magic working again... like dark makic an lack Magic are no the same, and Grey Magic was also on the bad list, but there are dark and Grey using Family who have Problem using ligh Magic so it is not fair o them to force them...like dumledore does! in the years bevor dumbledor power hungry reign he Magic was stronger an more easy
so a middle way would help all
Harry should work to find a way that both sides could stay calm an happy with...and stay the hell away from war-fighting and meddling cheming wrong playing guys like dumbledore...
it woul be interesting to know...if voldemort is even the father of Harry...how else should he know who his father is!
| Mirage chapter 14 . 10/24/2017
i think Rabastan goes at it the wrong way...when he is interested in Harry he should write up an official marriage proposal to the potters, as possible suitor...then he may get what he wants...and not simplyy try to kiss him, that is not a propper way for a pureblood.
i like the lestranges...when i did remember it right, was rabastan not a healeror such later, sure not after ascaban and such...im not sure but i think they did go there way because of bellatrix and voldemort offering them what they want too.
so i think why not give rabastan a Chance for a bether way of live ...away from voldemort
James is stupid, now he may have pushed severus to much, and maybe broken a big part of trust between hrry and himself...he should earn to see more than black and White and acting like ...dudley...
| Mirage chapter 6 . 10/24/2017
i dont think i understand why he again asked the stupid senil hat to out him in gryffindor, he is a slytherin...he could have changed so much...befriending severus and regulus and keeping them away from voldemort, the same goes for other slytherin and hufflepuff and such..
and why oes he hate Peter, right now he is only a stupid child who does othing but follow, so he still can be keeped on track...
| Dawn of Erised chapter 36 . 10/20/2017
Love love ️ this fic gets more amazing each time I read it
| SilverRosehp chapter 36 . 10/18/2017
Please update your story soon please I absolutely loved it and hope you continue it please please pretty please
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/13/2017
Why is harry not going to an adult?
| eubulie chapter 36 . 9/23/2017
wow i love this chapter, been waiting for the lemon for soo long But i wonder why harry isn't more proactive into defeating voldemort, i mean he should start destroying the horcruxs already and maybe revealing some core informations like the dark eater's HQ or some attacks that they are going to lauch and i really want him to buzz off that rat peter.
And with sirius and harry married does that mean that they're gonna have a baby who turns out to be the prophecy one or is it gonna be like cannon either way i'm impatient to read the rest.
Thank you for writing such an exciting fiction
| Adara chapter 36 . 9/16/2017
Please update soon... I cant wait any longer,it is so uh I love your stories i would have it if you abandoned it... What does snape think about the wedding?... regulus?
| Mj32 chapter 36 . 9/12/2017
Plz update...I'm waiting for so long :-(((((((((((
| K chapter 36 . 9/12/2017
Oh my goodness, how have I never stumbled across this story before?! I just spent all of yesterday, last night, and then this morning reading this from start to finish (sorry I didn't review per chapter, I was too eager to get on with the story to stop and comment on the way!) And really, where to even begin? Love love LOVE the character development throughout this whole piece. The characters are not only fleshed out thoroughly, but it makes characters like Severus and Reg (the former I never really felt for, even with his 'redeemable' Connor storyline/ending, and the latter who was never really fleshed out) not only relatable but their interactions with Harry during school beilievable. Same goes for his relationship with Sirius as well as the way he's - for lack of a better word currently - synthesized himself with the "new" Harry, rather than constantly deferring to his past relations with people (James as Dad, Sirius as godfather, Severus as professor, etc.)
On that note though, I am surprised Harry's not taking a more active role in "correcting the future" since he's fully integrated himself into this new life and has no desire to return to his old (thus removing most of the hesitation he would have against changing things. So yes not like he's trying to keep things the same so thworld is "as it should be" when he returns). At the very least I expected him to keep a closer eye on wormtail so that all the horrors Harry's told about in his past life during his stay at grimmauld about Order deaths can be mitigated at least a bit by taking out the spy before it comes down to Voldemort hunting down Lily and James...
But that is of course only my opinion and I can't wait to see how your story will continue to unfold!
Also can't wait to see who Harry's father is - I'm normally pretty good at picking up intertextual clues but for some reason this has me stumped! Granted I may have missed something somewhere around 5 am when my eyes quit on me for a few hours there lol who needs sleep anyway.
Thank you for sharing with us readers and for all the hard work, pre planning, and endless revision you must have put into this story so far! Hope you can update soon!
| sweetnat180 chapter 35 . 9/6/2017
OMG! Please update, I've been waiting 8 months to see whose reaction it will be. Will it be Severus or Regulus. Please don't leave us in the dark for another year.
| menolikey chapter 5 . 8/31/2017
This is probably my 4-6th time reading this story. I literally can't stop myself from clicking it when I see it in somebody else's favorite list. It is so, so good. I don't care if it takes you a thousand years to write it, I will truck on through just to have more of this in my life. Hell, I'd practice necromancy to have this in my undead life.
Thank you so much for writing. This story is so well put together and it's characters are charming and linger in the mind and the heart. I think you do a great job making Harry's emotions so believable. Again, thank you. :)
| sweetnat180 chapter 36 . 8/22/2017
Sigh, are you ever going to update this story? it feels like you only update one chapter a year.
| simsfans chapter 36 . 8/19/2017
What if the prophecy does not talk about the baby of Lily and James, if not the Harry and Sirius? The same prophecy says that a child of the seventh month, but does not say that year, as well as Sirius and Harry have faced three times and Voldemort thinks that the father of Harry is half blood or a muggle-born (apparently is considered a pure blood if your four grandparents were).
Ps: Sorry for my english, i'm using a translator,
| lilly-flower15 chapter 36 . 8/12/2017
Great chapter update soon