|Reviews for A New Life|
| mfmxxx chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
It's a really, really amazing fic.
I'm not keen on slash, so to be honest I'll skip most of the romance as the plot is good enough.
I like the interactions between the characters. Maybe have Harry befriend someone from the order at some point like Dorcas, who's said to be amazingly powerful, Marlene McKinnon, or Frank Longbottom?
I take it your going into post-Hogwarts life aswell?
Also, will you have Harry-Lily be better friends? I think she started to like James in 7th year, so maybe develop more interaction then?
Lastly, I see Sirius being the one to lash out at Rebastion if he ever finds out, as he's probably met him before more than James.
Lily and James died at 20/21, and got out of school at 17 and a half, and would be 19-ish when Harry graduates, so that's only a year for Harry to really be involved in the war, and also Peter passed information for a year, so maybe use a scene where Peter is really overlooked down the line as the reason for why he switches?
If I remember right, I heard a rumor- dunno if it's true, that James father died while he was at Hogwarts...
I would say Voldemort to be this Harrys father, but it seems too obvious
I got the feeling Lily didnt work, nor James/Sirius from what we got from Rowling, they graduated, joined the Order, and James used his inheritance to pay for the Marauders/Lily to live while fighting the war and thats why it isn't that much in Gringgotts if they're meant to be massively rich.
| SkylerKnight chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
This was great! Oh noes Severus is falling for Harry isn't he? I wonder if he will be the other relationship. Well cant wait to see what you have in stored for us.
| DDwelling chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
| Slytherson chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
In this story I'm getting the feeling that Tom Riddle might not have killed Harry's mom since a body was never found and I think maybe harry is his unknown son! Thank you for continuing this I know how hard it is to give up your personal time to write this fic for us reviewers but we do really appreciate what you write for us I think everyone does well I know I do! :)
| shamelessforyou chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
I have a feeling you're going to do Snarry? Snarry never made sense to me because Snape 'loved' Lily supposedly. Now unless, Snape was in love with James in a fic, I could understand lol
But I hope it isn't Snape. I'd think it might mess up their friendship.
I hope you don't let Regulus become a DE. I would rather him tell Orion and Walburga that he is above following someone. And secretly be neutral or light.
Also, I don't want Harry to be a pushover regarding Dumbledore that's the one thing I hated about the Order. They were like a cult as well to me at least. Remus and Molly didn't help that either. The rest on Dumbledore's orders without throwing a fuss agreed to isolate Harry right when he needed someone to help him get over the death of Cedric.
| zeichnerinaga chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
i like this chapter, please update soon.
| Anaphore chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
It's so sweet to see James amd Harry talking "for real"...their bond is amazing ! I'm happy Lestrange is a bit out of the picture for the moment, but I can't but think something's gonna happen because of him. And I am SO looking forward to seeing James'reaction at Harry's first boyfriend (hope he won't be too overprotective !) By the way, Severus likes Harry, doesn't he ? I wonder how this situation is going to evolve...
| olciak123 chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
Oh my, was Sev hitting on Harry? :D That'd or he's acting as protectove older brother and I cannot choose which one of those would be more unbelivable ;)
Amazing chapter, as always. Harry's just himlself, the dialogues are similar to daily ones, the most important events are higlighted. :* I'm waiting for more
| Fudge chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
So happy with the quick update! Great ch :)
| gwendel chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
I really love this story. You are a phenomenal writer.
| Pypera chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
Great chapter :). I really enjoyed it. I wonder if there are plots against Harry in the house of Slytherin, as Severus' behaviour indicates!
| CrystalBlues chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
sev appears to have a crush on harry... that's how i saw it. please don't let their current relationship be ruined.
from my perspective, i still see many many chapters before harry ends up in a relationship with sirius, and even then, there's going to be misunderstandings, heart breaks and so forth.
sirius is still too much of a flirt/ladies' man. he still sees harry as james' little brother. and he doesn't think/know he's gay.
i wonder who harry dates... :D
| Jesseka89 chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
Oh please don't make Severus fall in love with Harry and then lose him to Sirius, he already lost lily to James and this would be just heart breaking for him please please give Sev some forever love!
| PersephoneJackson123 chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
Amazing chapter :) It was absolutely outstanding. I can't wait to see who Harry will be with before Sirius!
The writing was flawless, the plot is magnificent, the grammar is impeccable and you just don't let me lose interest...need I say anything more about how awesome I think this story is?
Anyways, as for Lily's job position...I think she should be an unspeakable. That is one job that nobody from Hogwarts would expect her to do! You could give her a "cover-up" job as a healer (for the rest of the world she'd be a healer), while her real job would be as an unspeakable. I mean, aren't unspeakables supposed to train for two jobs, one as an unspeakable, and the other as a cover-up?
Moving on, I absolutely LOVE your story :) And I can't wait till Sirius and Harry finally get together! Can you at least give us a hint about WHEN they will finally get together? 5th year? 6th year? 7the year?
I can't wait for the next update :)
,May your quill never run dry _
| Sekhmet49 chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
I love your story! It was a great surprise to get a new chapter so soon. Thanks!
Btw, for Lily's job, what do you think of a Mastery in Runes? I thik it's a discipline which would suit her personality well...