cute ch!

this story makes me so happy!
I love it. Sirius and Harrys relationship is developing so well.
and they told Harry about them being animagus. lol finally!
it was a great update!
thanks for posting.

Love it! Does Harry refusing the proposition count as a defiance? Please, please, PLEASE update soon!

Nice chapter :)

love the story. hope to know who harry's dad is soon
grts A.B

Now what happened to James, Sirius, and Lily was an ambush aided with insider information if I ever saw one. The order has a traitor and I would like to understand why they have not pulled their left sleeves up to see who the traitor is...therefore I am asking why Harry doesn't use that information to help fight Voldie...

Good update. Only one quibble. This line: "And everyone was dueling and it was so chaotic. He seeked James out-" It should be "He sought James out-" Other than that, I don't see any problems.

I. Am. Slain.
Truly dead with love and also, do they not realize that Harry is basically the best liar they know? Will that ever come into play? I mean, he can play the expected role with enough emotion as to fool them into believing he really didn't know, and they know him the best out of everyone he knows...also, I really want Harry to recruit Severus and Regalus by showing them a Pensive. I just want it so bad! Of course, I just want SOMEONE to know of Harry's true situation, and for that person to NOT be Sirius.
Tl;dr:
You've slain me. Excellent job!

Love this story, hope you continue soon!

I thought it was 'cashier', not 'cassiere'.

Great job! I enjoyed it very much. Really, I honestly didn't know if he would act surprised at the animagi revelation or if he would be like, " Well duh! Finally! You know how long I've been waiting for you to tell me this?"

I really like this story and how the tension is building. Hope you update again soon.

lol

Adorable :) I dislike Sirius still keeping secrets from Harry, but at least he's telling some of them to him. I would really like to see Harry join the Order...and I wonder what Voldemort will do next. I can't imagine he's happy that James and Sirius got away...I wonder if he'll take out that anger on Jugson, and if Jugson for his part will take out his anger on Harry.

I loved the way you worked in Sirius and James's motorbike/police/death eaters adventure! Thanks for putting it in so well.

I'm thrilled Sirius and Harry's relationship is progressing believably. Good job.

Please tell me Harry and Sirius are not going to end up with the same father. I keep hoping that your Harry's dad is Voldie himself, but I've read enough "unknown parent" stories (and watched enough Soaps) to know that it usually turns out that the parent is the worst possible person in the child's life and this is one time that Voldie would not be the worst person.

Regardless of how you handle Harry's parentage or if he even ever finds out, thanks for writing an entertaining story. I look forward to Chapter 28.