|Reviews for In The Beginning|
| Raven's Dusk chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Fantastic story, and really well written!
| sweetlikethesixties chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Please will you post chapter 2? This is a very good portrayal of Carlisle.
| geophf chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
I like how you expanded the stories told in the Twilight series. Our calm Carlisle is almost overcome by agony, and that taints his voice, but he still has resolution. You mixed these primal elements to spin a compelling tale.
| Kaylee Tam chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I LOVED this story. This was EXACTLY what I was looking for. I was thinking of Carlisle's beginning and logged on to find it, and here it is! And it definitely lived up to my expectations. I love stories like this, about inner conflict and feelings, and I can't wait for more.
You ARE going to update, right?
| xxtwilight chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
That was very interesting! You have a good writing style, and this part of Carlisle's life is not usually explored. Great job.
| Ananke chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
I really like this so far. It's an unusually detailed look into a portion of Carlisle's life we don't typically get to see, and I think you've got his character down perfectly. Please write more!