Reviews for Fated Pasts, Chaotic Future
A Reader chapter 11 . 10/17/2016
Well I just found this story of course I thought it was LOD and I was just remembering the name wrong so glad I decided to read it. I like your improvements but you really should apply it to the whole story and really make it your own. It might have been finished by now if you had. Now this also means fixing parts that would not of happened in the series. Like Ranmas first transformation should have been during the battle not when they gave her the transformation rod in fact they should not have even given her it she should have found it when knocked away from fight then used it instinctively. Also when you get back to writing this please do better at Terra's powers then just being an amplifier for the others powers. Give her some powers as a senshi that are her powers when not relying on the others to fight.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/20/2014
UPDATE
anthony883 chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD FINISH THIS STORY ! IT IS TOO GOOD OF A STORY TO LEAVE IN LIMBO !
Omnitroid1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
This is really good! Looking forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!
dragon-game chapter 11 . 5/15/2013
Good story.
I hope you continue it.
Grizzmon chapter 11 . 4/1/2013
Well, that's a crazy family...
Grizzmon chapter 10 . 4/1/2013
Well looks like the real fight just started...
Grizzmon chapter 9 . 4/1/2013
Why you had to make her Remember? Bad Rei!
Grizzmon chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
Well yeah, Keigo whatever...
Grizzmon chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
Yeah Sorry Ranma, you are a Senshi...
Grizzmon chapter 6 . 4/1/2013
Yes, some things never change...
Grizzmon chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
Well, I like holograms...
Grizzmon chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Well yes, it seems awful convenient, don't you think?
Grizzmon chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Well, I would have thought the Daimon would have absorbed the attack... since it was made of chi...
Grizzmon chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Well, of course Ranma would try to fight the monster...
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