Reviews for Truth or Dare Lily Evans?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
Lily Brown chapter 1 . 3/18
GraceTeresa chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
Nice! you can use grammarly for spellings etc, if u don't have a beta
Jayel Potter chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
that was very very good indeed! evil remus was exciting.
Dragonrider42 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Love it! I think I'll use that trick on stwo of my friends... XD
angelsfanfictions chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
DramioneGirl90 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
yay! james n lily 4ever!
LillyFlowerLovesHerHunnie chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Haha I love it! It's really funny at the end.
clarklois4ever chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
great strory
QueenGryffindor chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
This was really cute. I also liked that this was in first person perspective. People usually don't do that with Lily. It's different, and I like that.
KlainePotter chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
i love it!
vbcrazy101 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
omg that is histerical! u write realy well! awsomeness
TroublesomeTwins chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Hi! good story. luv it. c ya!
Emmett's evil vampire bunnies chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
I'll be honest, it's not the worst I've seen. I have pretty bad grammar myself. But it is fixable. You should get a beta though and becareful because the board you had used was the wrong one. it was bored. umm yeah not ya (though actually thats authors choice, its better if you use yeah though.) Umm O.K. is better if you write it OK. oh and K should be kay. It really isn't that bad, i promise... it could just be better. definatly look into a beta though. I'll be one if you like... though my friend randompanda940 or iliandra940 is better.
ilo6409 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
"YA" this sucked.

Rubbish grammar
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