|Reviews for Pizza Slave|
| JoeMerl chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Well, now, this was interesting. :-) Delightfully weird. It seems to be missing a few scenes, though, because I'm confused-was Zim hypnotized or something? Because at first he didn't seem to know what he was doing, and then he did at the end...and how did Gaz do that? Also, was GIR's pizzas just a coincidence? At first I thought maybe had had attacked Chuck...
Anyway, overall I thought this was a great little story, I'll have to be on the lookout for more of your stuff. Thanks!