Oh yes, loved this highlighting of things that went wrong and what should have been done. Now I'm really looking forward to reading the other chapters!

Yeah, JKR really dropped a ball with the fidelius when she made Bill the secret keeper of shell cottage.

Bhahaha, the ending is brilliant. Yeah, Dumbles did that in canon too, totally!

Honestly, the thing with not calling Voldie a Voldie in book 7 is bullshit. They should've either learnt about the Taboo before or get the snatchers on their ass much earlier. This could've been tied up right after Fleur's wedding when they get the snatchers on them first - just kidnap and question them to learn about the taboo! They made a huge deal for years (cue DA sessions from OotP) of "call him Voldie not you-know-who" but then suddenly changed for some bullshit reason? They were acting like a bunch of mudblood, how about looking up instead why the you-know-who term was a thing since the Taboo has been used in the previous war as well, instead of preaching holier-than-thou shit like that?

This SPEW thing in canon is why wizards call people like her a mudblood.

I know that's not what the point was but now I can't get away with the mental picture of Luna being considered dangerous because she's insane. Her canon-style loony could do with some upgrade to maniacal-loony just for the giggles.

*slaps table* Damn! Yes! Thank you!
In canon, there was no proof that Quirrelmort could've breached the final protection on the stone, namely the mirror, by himself. He was actually stumped by that thing, in canon! So either he would have to just take and carry away the mirror itself (which it seems to be protected against since he didn't already done that from the first instead of wasting time like he did) or he would have to go out and capture a patsy like an imperioused firstie to use him/her as a lockpick. And in canon the said patsy just self-delivered to him for that. So there was no reason for golden trio to go there anyway, but McKitty was so overworked doing THREE jobs that she didn't take the time to explain it to them instead of quickly disregarding them like she did.

Oof, harsh. Stop pocking holes into all the soulbond fics out there, some of them are nice despite how ridiculously bullshit plot device that thing is.

Hahaha, this is the most hilarious take on PoA ending! Who needs crackfics when you can make canon hilarious by being logical and rational.

haha

IMO McGonagall does NOT deserve being avenged by Harry. She's a capable witch, if it bothers her that someone spat at her she can take care of punishment herself. And with all her arse kissing whenever Dumbledore committed a crime she deserves something else instead of help. Her participation in Dumbledore's gauntlet in the first book deserves a lengthy stay in no-star hotel Azkaban.

Apart from that the Unforgivables are not unforgivable. They are (perhaps) unforgivable unless you're pureblood, rich, influential, or a mix of those three. Draco used all three in the sixth book, AND showed expertise that can come only with lots of practice. He attacked Harry with the Cruciatus. Harry dared defend himself against immeasurable pain. Immediately the death eater teacher stormed in, saved the death eater student and gave the victim WEEKS of detentions. He never even took a single point from Draco, far less handed him over to the DMLE for lifelong incarceration.

So, going by how long ago it was since this story has been last updated (15 years at that! How time flies...) I think I can consider it to be finished, so I'd like say that it was a very entertaining and hilarious story, this concept of either Hermione or Harry (and Ron to a slighter extent) using logic on the Wizarding World is absolutely brilliant.

All in all I'm glad to have stumbled upon this story.

Thank you for sharing this with us all!

Wouldnt alot of the signs be applicable to Ron

Ginny doesn't have flaws? Have you forgotten that she's a coalburner?

LMAO!
That last line was hilarious.
I guess Ron is more of an 'idiot-savant' regarding strategy/chess but very dim on other things.