|Reviews for Histories|
| kitkatritrat chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Although I've never even heard of Ace Lightning I have to say this is a good one-shot. You were able to convey the character's feelings well and even sneak in some of your own beliefs. I don't know much about Lady Illusion, but what from what I got from the peek inside her mind you gave me she seemed to be a 'bad guy' with good motives and morals. That's kind of self-contradictory . In my opinion characters need to be an extreme with flaws. Either extremely normal (with one or a few interesting traits unless they're 'extras'), extremely bad (with maybe one 'soft-spot'), extremely good (with one or a few flaws), or extremely torn between good and evil (an anti-hero). The Lady struck me as more of the latter. But that's just my opinion. The only thing that really bothered me about this fic is that she started off sounding really evil (which was cool *thumbs-up*) and then towards the end she just sounded like a good guy on the bad guy side. Which can be good, too...if you do it right. Overall, good writing and some intriguing thoughts, -Kit Kat
| Wile E. Coyote chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Sarah? Why did you change your name?
Great one-shot. Lady Illusion has too many relationships.
| Scarabbug chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
A very well written one shot, this. And It's so nice to see new Acefic popping up after such a long which. Great to see :D
I would offer a more useful review but I'm afraid I can't think of anything right now: it's very well written and an intriguing glimpse into the nature of humanity through a non-human's eyes. Onto my faves it goes.