|Reviews for Colours of Sunset|
| Myra R chapter 1 . 1/21
Moving, beautifully written and so true...
| FightfortheUsers chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
more poetry than a story.
| Madam'zelleGiry chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
"...its monotonous hum" I love the way that you contrasted the concept of "monotonous" and "love" because they aren't words that I typically associate as being related. The contrast was just the thing to pull me into the piece and I really loved it. Fascinating.
"...whe she lulls..." Typo here.
"...bule as your children's..." Typo again. That aside, I really liked the way that you associate the color with these memories. Memories that are very painful, but that he cannot let go of. And I like the hint that he wants to let the color keep those memories fresh. Being constantly surrounded by the color is a way of keeping them alive in his mind.
The transition from color to color was really lovely. You have a really lovely way with imagery, and it really makes everything come together so that we can feel appreication for each aspect of his life. The idea of the sunset with colors of gold and black was my favorite part. As well as: "Memories are in gold, but remembering in black." Really, really splendid.
I really enjoyed this piece. Well done and good luck in the future!
| America Liberty chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
That was amazing
you write beautiful