|Reviews for Colours of Sunset|
| Ryanwe chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
A really beautiful story: I liked how you explore the memories of the captain through colours and the explanation of *his* colours.
"Your colours are like the sunset... But for now your colours are gold and black. And there is a lot more black than gold... Never forgetting. Mwmories are in gold, but remembering in black."
This quote is simply lovely. And the last senence... is just heartbreaking. Thanks for writing and posting!
| 2000Aerobars chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Oh.. My Goodness, that was so beautiful; and precious. I have tears in my eyes. You wrote this brilliantly, I could feel a rhythm flowing through it, like it came from the heart.
This is... incredible
| Myra R chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Moving, beautifully written and so true...
| Ifightfortheusers chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
more poetry than a story.
| Madam'zelleG chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
"...its monotonous hum" I love the way that you contrasted the concept of "monotonous" and "love" because they aren't words that I typically associate as being related. The contrast was just the thing to pull me into the piece and I really loved it. Fascinating.
"...whe she lulls..." Typo here.
"...bule as your children's..." Typo again. That aside, I really liked the way that you associate the color with these memories. Memories that are very painful, but that he cannot let go of. And I like the hint that he wants to let the color keep those memories fresh. Being constantly surrounded by the color is a way of keeping them alive in his mind.
The transition from color to color was really lovely. You have a really lovely way with imagery, and it really makes everything come together so that we can feel appreication for each aspect of his life. The idea of the sunset with colors of gold and black was my favorite part. As well as: "Memories are in gold, but remembering in black." Really, really splendid.
I really enjoyed this piece. Well done and good luck in the future!
| America Liberty chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
That was amazing
you write beautiful