Reviews for 80 years ago
Guest chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
you're cool... by the way nice story
abby chapter 4 . 12/9/2012
im really sorry, i do like the idea and the plot but i would like to give u some helpful criticism. please don't be offended i don't hate you or this story because i actually love it. you have a unique writing style and the only problem is that it is a bit too short. e.g the last chapter was only a paragraph long not counting the authors notes. im sure we would all appreciate it if you could write chapters instead of paragraphs. thank you for taking the time to read this. again, no offense is meant to you or the story. i do actually like this story but it could do for some improvements. again, im not flaming or hating on you. keep up the relatively good work.

a fan of you,
TulipNixphe chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
courtneycullen chapter 9 . 7/3/2010
hurry up i want to read more of the story
Kyerae97 chapter 9 . 4/13/2010
maybe bella only trusts edward for now, & doesn't talk much around the others.
Merme Cullen chapter 9 . 8/21/2009
she dosen't forgive carlile for alog time he beggs but she can never really forgive him edward understands her lost but dosn't know what eles shes been hiding that she was hurt by others or that she tride to kill herselve something like that something that happened in carliles life so that they canrelate and understand eachother something alone those lines

i hope i helped

Merme Cullen :) :P
lilylunaweasleypotter chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
like the story
bubbly4twilight chapter 6 . 7/6/2009
i like it but it's kinda short but it has a lot of potential its good
lover of all book chapter 9 . 7/5/2009
when will you update? i love this story! and i have an idea on the next part...

well in the morning bella could have a heart to heart with carlisle and the talk could turn into two differant outcomes (1) she could forgive him and join the family, then fall in love with edward; with some drama of course or (2) bella could not fully accept carlisle and leave again. when gone she could form a new coven then years later acedentily (sp*) run into the cullens again, but this time;with a hell lot of drama; finally join the cullen and full madly in love with edward

personally i like the second one because it would make the story long but hey it up to you! update soon!

ps sorry about all the spelling mistakes i don't know why i can't spell's sad really...
Ltju chapter 9 . 4/26/2009
FamilyBonding! *Big smile!*

Maybe James, Laurent &Victoria? Or the volturi of course D
BreGyrl23 chapter 9 . 4/14/2009
hurry up with chapter 10 on 80 years ago !
MixMatch chapter 9 . 4/11/2009
OF course it couild be an Edward and Bella story and it should take some time for bella t get used to Carlisle and rosalie should be the sam braty person and maybe she thought she drank all of her brothers blood but didn't just a few ideas
dlead7 chapter 8 . 3/26/2009
awesome chapter

update soon :D
bornagoof chapter 9 . 3/26/2009
I think should put a scene with Bella and Carlisle talking.
bornagoof chapter 8 . 3/26/2009
its sad I didn't know before you wrote it that she killed her brother so sad so very sad.
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