|Reviews for Perfection|
| Dahlia16 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
It shouldn't be that good.
...I'm jealous .
| Dahlia16 chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
first, I'm a german, so my english isn't that well. Please don't judge me for that. I know it's a bad excuse, but I'm only 13 years old.
I'm not sure what to think about your text. I mean-when I found out that he has a wife I was so shocked-of course I knew that Franziska has got a mother. But it's...unbeliebable that a perfect god like him is in love...
In Addition I don't know what to think about a Young Manfred von Karma. A Manfred von Karma who wants to get a date, a Manfred von Karma who is worried about his date, a von Karma who kisses someone...It's...kinda scary...
But I think, if he IS in love your version is a possibility. (I'm not sure if that was right, I mean that it could've happened like you described it.)
I'll never accept nicknames like "Manny", sorry. And if he is in his early thirties he just started to work as a prosecutor. He was 25 when he began, so what do you mean by "earliy thirties"?
After all, I don't know what to think. I quite can't believe he's in love...It...contradicts the evidence...But if he is I like your story.
Sorry for my english-I hope you understood what I meant.
| Persian chapter 7 . 10/12/2010
I just finished to write the 7 chapters of this story... And I must say it's awesome! Too bad you stopped it... Since Von Karma and Gant are two of my fav AA characters (though I don't like them as much as Will Powers...) the idea of a love triangle between Manfred, Damon and an OC is really interesting. I really like how you describe Manfred's obsession for perfection and Damon is just hilarious!
I just noticed something funny... we seem to like the same characters for a few fandom... Von Karma, Gant (from AA games), Snipe, Ravess, (from Storm Hawks). XD
| MattsyKun chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
...lol. Made of win, this one thinks.
| MattsyKun chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
...if a von Karma expects perfection in all things, does that make them Mary Sues and Gary Stu's themselves? Hmm... xD
| Esther-Diana chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
I'm really glad that you updated :) I think Gant should be in the love triangle as it seems pretty in character for him to be all friendly with "Manny" whilst trying to steal his girlfriend.
| Dean Gabriel chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
I think Gant should just go D:
But other than that, great story I'll be keeping watch for your next update :D
| Indochine chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
Humm I like your story so much! For the semi love triangle, do what you thnik. Anyway at the end we all know with who Adelina will be. Manny!
| Tarafishes chapter 7 . 1/20/2009
The story's getting good M...Gant and von Karma in baithing suits. *_*
I like the idea of Gant with a semi major role. And a love triangle. XD So that's my vote on it.
| custardmaker chapter 7 . 1/20/2009
yayz! this is good! i can imagine Gant (known to my friends who don't play AA as Mr. Rape) trying to take her from Manfred etc, i think you got him perfectly! And youve got Manfred too, well done!
please update soon
| Esther-Diana chapter 6 . 12/21/2008
I'm really enjoying your story, Gant is so funny. I can't wait to hear about the swimming date.
| tReA chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
hey this is interesting XD one of those rare intriguing storylines XD hope to read more soon!
| xKumax chapter 6 . 11/29/2008
Ha ha, a von Karma is always perfect. It makes me giggle that he relates everything to a court case, that man would be hell to date. I feel sorry for Adelina in a way.
| xKumax chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
Oh my gosh, even better, Gant drunk. Hilarious.
| xKumax chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Oh, bad move von Karma, bad bad move! I see him ending up more drunk than Adelina; let the hilarity ensue _