Reviews for Something Going On |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The idea of Eric Raymond running a day care is terrifying and funny. I just loved this story it was hysterical. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is an older story, but I just wanted to let you know I ADORED this Eric, he's still the same bastard of the show, but this is the side I always imagined/wanted him to have3 Story was 100% perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, it's great to see a Minx/Techrat fic! (although I recently leafed through the archive) You portrayed everyone very well, even the Misfits (though maybe it's my nostalgia that's painting Stormer as much of a nicer person that would tolerate Techrat with more kindness) with their somewhat cheesy catchphrases! I was thoroughly amused by everyone's arguing and when Eric misunderstood Techrat/Minx's situation, really this fanfic is gold for the archive! :) My only confusion at all would be in this one sentence: "He gawped a moment, torn between "Oh no!" and "All..." What is 'gawped'? Or is that a spelling error? Either way, I decided to point that out /shrug Anyways, amazing fanfic, it was funny, great characterization (though one more thing, you made Eric a lot more dynamic than he was in the show ;D), and really enjoyable. But, I have a lingering feeling Techrat and Minx are just really good at hiding secrets and probably did do something... ;) ―Vera |
![]() ![]() I just wanna say how much I LOVE both Minx/Techrat and the way you write Eric Raymond. You've got him likeable while keeping him perfectly in character, and it's brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply marvelous! You've inspired me to dust off my JemSaga perpetual work in progress. Keep it coming! |
![]() ![]() This is one of the funniest thing I've ever read! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your characterization is spot on...and hilarious |
![]() ![]() aw I loved it! I think minx and tech rat would make a cute couple. I certianly think hes hot! I liked Riot's cameo as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() A ps. Good job. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() God your good! Sarah |