Reviews for Secret
hi chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
MY GOD I LOVE YOUR FANFICS! Keep it up;)
kitty witty chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
good
Mrs. VampDiva Belikov chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Loved this story!
nhrc chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
There is room for improvement, but overall, the elements in your stories are good
The Storyteller of Old chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
it would be funy if you turned this into a comedy. Edward comes in like"Carlisle I'm home! What are you and bella do-?" and girlishly screams that would've been funny.
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Loved it!
Mrs. Jasper Lee Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
ALICE KNOWS

oh right she can see when they decide to do IT
Sonja Whitlock chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Mrs Weasley thank you for the very erotic tale you provided for us readers to fantasize over. I must admit this is my first Bella / Carlisle pairing. Now ... I am dying to read more.
Silver Scorpion chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
THAT WAS FUCKIN' HOT! BELLA SOUND LIKE A DAMN RIGHT WHORE AND IT IS AWESOME! D WRITE MORE!
cbrendible chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Incredible... I don't think anymore needs to be said.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Good chapter.
AutumnSong chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Wow!
Ms.Lovett'sSmutShop chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I fink I am in love with you and your writing. :3 3
Vani88 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I am hesitant.. although I love the story, and you no-doubt have a great ability to portray both characters well, I am in doubt about her feelings... I am the "one and only love" type of person, so imagining that she could fall for two guys (especially "father" and "son") is very difficult... but you portray her hesitation very well...
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