Very well written. You were able to incorporate a lot of elements of the series to create a plot worthy of Lelouch. Though I'm not quite sure whether or not I like your concept of Lelouch and C.C.'s relationship, what you did with Lelouch and Kallen worked very well.

Whoa this is a great fic keep up the good work

great fic i like this kallen and lelouch...still kinda sad though would want him to think of her as more then a pond...but hey anime is messd like that...cant wait for nxt ep though lol hope u make another KxL fic soon me likey a lot!