Reviews for Requiem of a Dream
fanfic lover chapter 4 . 6/8
make a new chapter please this book is interesting
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 4 . 11/13/2013
Hope to see more of this story, very original way to force harry and draco together
melamariannie chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
Un capítulo espectacular, cielos Ginny, me fastidia, en serio. Voldy y sus travesuras, y este Peter, espero que de verdad le arranque el corazón, (no me gusta este tipo), gracias por capítulo, besos
melamariannie chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Que clase de animago será Narcisa, me pregunto, ahhh bueno, Lupin al menos no hizo gran escándalo como lo harán seguramente los demás, gracias por otro capítulo, me encantó, besos
melamariannie chapter 2 . 10/23/2013 convivencia, je je, se pone interesante, ¿como reaccionaran los de la orden? (que vayan a freír monos en mi humilde opinión, son tan entrometidos), gracias por el capítulo, me gusta cada vez más la historia...besos
melamariannie chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Un interesante primer capitulo, me encantó el nombre del bebé, je je, esperaré a ver que pase...gracias por el capítulo, besos
Mila Pink chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
I loved it.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
UPDATE please
Bo chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
When are you final this it Piss me off when it so but not final
sweetteatwo chapter 4 . 11/2/2011
just came across this story this morning I

like how well written the four chapter's are

and I like how so far how real the character's

seem. It haves been two years since the last up-

date and I was wondering will you ever update and

finish this story?
sess18 chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
Please update soon I like your story.
El' Caliente chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
plz update soon!
BreGurl23 chapter 4 . 2/10/2011
hurry up with chapter 5 please
lykle chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
The story is well written so far and has a lot of potential.

My only word of advice would be to avoid charactor bashing. I get the feeling that you dislike the Weasleys and that you want us to dislike them as well, but you have to realise that character bashing really lowers the standard of a story whether it's well written or not.

So if you want to show a different side to the Weasleys, don't just announce to us that Harry can't stand them anymore or that their opinions on everything are wrong and annoying because thats just ridiculus and childish. Instead give us reason to believe that they have earned our dislike...and with prominant good characters like the Weasleys that is going to be very difficult.

Creating OOC's a tricky skill that even the most experianced writers have difficulty doing, so if you want to improve your own writing skill don't hold petty grudges against your characters.
purrfus chapter 4 . 4/13/2010
I was really hoping that somehow this would resolve itself by the end of this chapter. No such luck. Oh well, maybe someday.

The attempted baby takeover - body swapping or just bugged?
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