Reviews for Magic
ArkAngel1179 chapter 13 . 4/14/2013
Sequel on Naruto's perspective from Hina.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
I'm not too sure I like this. The voice of the original characters are non-existant. If you wanted it that way, you should have warned the reader of extreme occ-ness. That, and Kakashi is super bipolar. The idea of this story is great, but I think it could have much better flow.
Lavi329 chapter 13 . 1/2/2011
amazing story. sorry if this review is mad late but que sera sera. i really did cry there for a terrible at reviews but truly epic story. a sequel involving his son would be cool or a story about naruto up in hina with namikaze and fer reading if u get this.
Kushina Nar chapter 13 . 9/29/2010
btw im narugurl10 but i changed my name...i was recently deleting emails, and a story alert popped up saying that the last chapter of this was up! i was SHOCKED! stupid emails getting lost, so i clicked on it and i read it and i fell in love with your story allllll over again! you're truely an amazing author, and you got me to cry! thnx for saying what you said bout me btws, and im so happy that you got to finish this story!
kiki1234 chapter 13 . 7/22/2009
why did you have to make it so sad!
RaiderXV chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
Very sad but poetic ending. Good story.
Raiden050 chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
I am sorry but out of all the stories I have read this isnt one of the best. It had promise but seemed to rushed.
Halan Lore chapter 13 . 10/13/2008
I'd love to see a sequel! ... ahh man Kyuubi was so nice in this one... but it's a good point... does that make the song immortal? I wonder how Sasuke died... Hm. The letters put an excellent percpective on things though!
ToushirouLover chapter 12 . 10/11/2008
omg i feel sad now. i liked it though
crazzyredhead chapter 13 . 9/24/2008
please add more it been nice if you did
Smencil chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
Yaya Andsty Naru-chan XD
Hijokugei chapter 13 . 9/20/2008

This seems a bit overly rushed.

I mean, the premise is good and all, but the story needs something in front, and this should be like, i dunno, condensed into 3 chapters or summat.

Still, good story!
DarkRavie chapter 13 . 9/20/2008
The epilogue was great, but sad. I hate that naruto died. Maybe you can write an alternate epilogue where he lives. Maybe his parents find a way for him to live and still have a child and become hokage. Either way, I enjoyed your fic and thank you for writing and sharing it.
NarutoL0ver chapter 13 . 9/20/2008
LMAO hahaha. Okay, okay I'm sorry and beg forgiveness for not reviewing. I'm a terrible person. Good story, I enjoyed reading it even if it seamed to come out of the blue at some parts. Again I'm sory for not reviewing. I'll make a deal with you though, you and read the only story I've ever wriiten/am writing, and flame the heck out of it! Sorry again! ~NarutoL0ver~
DarkRavie chapter 12 . 9/20/2008
Very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in the next one.
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