Reviews for The Tree Story
sakuraXnatsume chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I like this. Short and sweet. Just like this couple :)
Black Maya chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Aww this is cute

Yeap, my review is useless, forgive me. OTL

Keep writing, Ejo!

-Black Maya-
Sadz0012 chapter 1 . 10/6/2011

Luved it, nice work. Keep up the good work. :)
Shuffle Princess chapter 1 . 10/5/2011

They met, kissed and will break up under the tree. XDD

That was Hotaru, indeed. :DD

Yadda yadda! I like Hotaru;s thought which is so true..

'You wouldn't notice he was looking at you, if you weren't looking at him in the first place'

- Lunar
weemeex chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
hey really good story xx
Six and Dregs chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Awww. It's short and simple at the same time. Nice nice.

This is your first oneshot ah?

You even revised this. I personally must say that you shouldn't need to revise it. I mean, how bad can it be?
Pechay chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Nancy Haibara chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Weird but good...
Sera Hux chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
wow..That was a nice story I'm glad they didnt break up
Irrevocable Memory chapter 1 . 8/14/2009

The plot is good. Although the wording could have been improved.

Like what another reviewer said, try adding more details.

Not too much, but just the right amount.

Keep this story simple and short. I think it was meant that way.

So anyway, that's about it for my comments on this story.

Hope you can improve it to make it better! :)


black neko hime chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
lol. wow.

that'd be so ptitiful if they seriously broke up under that tree. it'd all be because of a misunderstand...

poor tree(almost)

it's a good thing to have best friends like hotaru and ruka.

super-blue chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
i didnt really get this
Chattykitkat chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
MKSakura chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
wow.. it's short but it's TOTTALY GREAT.
Trishia chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
lol! i love this story! but you could have made more of this! i mean, you have the idea so you should make it longer! anyways.. well done!
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