|Reviews for Wild Horses|
| raccoonabby22 chapter 1 . 8/25
A great take on "Bridge To Teribithia". It was very moving when my teacher first read it to me in third grade. My new favorite fanfic.
| Toaofwriting chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
| AnimeFan202 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This was so good! Heartwrenching and sweet at the same time. You should be proud. :)
| Rainbow Manes chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
| overstreets chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Too stunning for words :).
| Bryan VanUnen chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I thought it was well written. There could be improvement (but there's always room for that in anything, isn't there?)It felt a bit too rushed, IMO. Other than that, it Felt slightly reminiscint of T.A. Barron's writing. Last thing I wanna say is that the movie Bridge to Terabithia makes me cry everytime I see it. Jess and Leslie are two of my most absolute favorite characters of all time. This fanfic did them justice, and did, in fact, make me shed a few tears. The very thought of Jess getting a chance to say goodbye to Leslie is a very emotional one.
| aa127 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
...I wouldve cried had I been in the mood, thats how beautiful this story was...
| SuperxXxGirl79 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
aw...that was cute, and sweet and it is DEF going on my favorites page!
| Joan Grace Almo chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Really sweet! With Leslie still physically gone, though, one could still feel the pain and longing afterwards. But then, that's life. When someone passes on, it really does hurt, but you learn to deal with it after some time. Reading between the lines, that's probably how Jess was feeling at the end of the fic.
| shoopshoopforshiz chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Wow, that was really touching. I am impressed.
| TopazEyesForever chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
i hvae an accont on here but i cant be bothered to open it at the moment.
anyhow, i watched the film and cried so much, for like, half an hour afterwards, me and my mum were really effected by it and this story made me feel much better about the whole leslie dying thing. so thank you very much for writing it.
| BourneNCISlover21 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
this was really good! I love the idea and portrayal!
| Staccato Rhythm chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Simply stunning. You captured every character brilliantly and they seemed more than mere words. I swear I could see them the whole time. -grins- I've got an over-active imagination.
| Lilyflowerrff chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
great one shot, i thought it was well written. definitely one of my favorites.
| Mark R. Whitten chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Okay, first of all, the grievences:
You said Jess was listening to his i-Pod when the accident happened. How could Jess afford an i-pod if his family was on a budget? (They cost about four-hundred and fifty dollars.)
I like the way you have written this; limited punctuation mistakes, good use of similies and metaphors to enhance the story without going overboard with them, inventive use of verbs to keep things fresh ("Jess 'captured' her hand." NICE!) and the dialouge is pretty well done.
The "rolling hills" should have been described without the word green though; in the night, they don't look green, so much as black and it's hard to shift from the mental image of green hills in the daytime to dark hills at night.
I like this story. I think you could keep it going and have a strong following. I especially like the whole "Leslie lives in the stars." I came up with that myself a while back but never wrote it down. Did you get that part from Dragonheart or Stardust maybe?