Reviews for Send Me Flying
beeharps chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
wow i loved it amazing kinda a turn on
emily chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
omg this was so hot! extremely well done this was amazingly sexy great job!
SycoSiren chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
yes that was very good one of the best ive read im so not a perv but enjoy reading people intrigues on how edward would during nything sexual but yes your pov were very good and the begging was cute how u detailed everything so i give u thumbs up sweetie
mrs.edwardcullen1312 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
this was the best lemon i've ever read. it was so loving and in character but you still managed to make it sexy. this was a really cute story, you're a great author.
Jackiswhack chapter 1 . 6/27/2008

i love stries with a vunrable edward... SO HOT

but dominating edward is SO much hotter but still this edward was great. You still made it sweet, amazing
eternalsunshines chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I loved it!
natcat chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
great story line!
MadamSnark chapter 1 . 6/26/2008 intense

really good!
SilverLunarStar chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
This is a very, very good lemon!

I've read many lemons throughout the years and this is definitely one of the hottest, and sweetest, lemons I've read in a long, long time!

Fantastic job!

MC25 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
use the word breasts instead of boobs when writing a sex scene or even foreshadowing one

The oral sex probably wasn't needed, and you defintely didn't need to make Bella swallow.
my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
awe so cute in an a weird way
nikita rowane chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
great job! i like how you kept both characters in character (sounds odd o.o) but i've read stories where all of a sudden they both acted like experienced strippers. i'm happy to read one story, for once, that held onto their given personalities.

kudos to you on this. :D
Carlisle060 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
that was hot

Bloodapple123 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
That was hot! It was written well although they were a tad to confident 4 a first time. Loved it. Keep writing you've got great potential.
RedK-UK chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
That was beautifully written and so hot! You really write the characters well :)

You should write more!
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