Reviews for Send Me Flying
sambeam chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
It was very good, but not for a first time. There was some awkward parts, but a first time isn't going to be so perfect, I doubt Bella would be confident enough to give Edward head, and dward would be too nervous to actually touch her down there. The actual lemon writing is very good, just not for a first time.
Eclipse My Reality chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
It was actually really good. I think it was alittle more ooc than needed, but nothing outrageous.
CydneyElyse chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Never read this in a library... They will find you and kick you out...
ladystrider77 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
yay first review! that was delicious and saved me from a depressing day of monotony at work.

I liked the description of her outfit, very cute/sexy!

It's always nice when edward stops thinking and does what feels right...

Lovely little story, hope to read more from you.

karina5185 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
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