|Reviews for Believe In Me|
| Emina333 chapter 6 . 10/2/2016
Did you name Ao or base him off of the horse from Kyo Kara Maoh?
| inuyashamunkey chapter 68 . 5/19/2016
YAY I LOVED THIS STORY. i spent all night reading it. i woke up around 9pm and now it's 9:35 am. ill probably go read some more stuff you wrote before i have to go to bed XD
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
Great plot and chapter
| J.K. Kelly chapter 68 . 6/21/2015
I'm crying happy tears, its not fair!
That was truly a beautiful story, I really enjoyed it. I'm sad to see it go but I'm glad I read it and finally finished. I kept putting it off knowing I would get emotional, kind of like with all your other stories.
I really love reading your works, you must put a lot of effort and love into them, it's obvious in how well written they are. Truly works of art, just like Roy's pictures lol.
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/13/2015
I wonder what direction you're going with this side effect of Ed's water alchemy. Are you going to go Avatar on us or is it going to be something completely different.
| RippleInThePond chapter 68 . 5/8/2015
Wait, did he fix the chimera? And what about the exams. I want to know about this stuff as well as his nephew and the life that Roy and Ed build together. If you are capable of making a sequel to this story, I would love it.
| INACTIVE123456789 chapter 6 . 2/21/2015
mhmm, it seems to me, at least, that riza is a little ooc, with how she communicates with mustang's team. she is often composed and talks quite formally. also, i don't think roy could ever do such a thing to riza. they may not "love" each other but they have such a strong bond...but hey, that's just my opinion!
i loved the chase scene though! ed is incredible.
| INACTIVE123456789 chapter 4 . 2/21/2015
I usually review on every chapter, but since I'm like 7 years late to the party... yeah ok. I've had this fic in my bookmarks for such a long time & I'm finally getting the chance to read it! I heard such great things about your writing and stories & until now, I'm loving this fic. I love the way you write Roy the most, just the right amount of everything. I also LOVE that you gave him Bradley's sword.
though I prefer a lesser number of chapters with longer content in each, I can't complain. the pacing is great.
| Quinn1989 chapter 16 . 1/20/2015
I want to say some thing about the last sentence.
Considering that Ed is younger by around a dozens years, he still can be "Furher" when Roy steps down. Or he can make Roy step down.
Secondly, as far as I know Ed can always take the way to parliament (as far as I know it exist in the FMA universe) and there, he would undoubtedly have strong influence.
| Quinn1989 chapter 10 . 1/20/2015
I see the point in Roy being a STRONG alchemist.
But that lis not the same as a "good" alchemist.
Strong is battle strength, and in this Roy may be dangerous as Ed.
Good means: being able to form new theories or create new alchemy and in this Roy is the "last" of the trio (In order: Edward, Alphonso, Roy)
| Quinn1989 chapter 9 . 1/20/2015
Just one thing.
The chess pieces were great
| Quinn1989 chapter 4 . 1/20/2015
Just a word about Mustangs "rival my own."
Edward is ten times if not 100 times the alchemist that Roy is.
Roy has not even invented his own alchemy, unlike Edward.
| Quinn1989 chapter 2 . 1/20/2015
I would not let me be in the same room as Mustarng right now, for after it I would have the problem to cover a corpse.
| Quinn1989 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Antartica is NOT far enough to NOT find a certain someone and beat him so much even Edward can call him small.
| Anon chapter 68 . 12/29/2014
Wow! It's a testament to your writing that i consumed it in one sitting, unable to let it go. I love ed & roy, how you've managed to keep them in character whilst still presenting the many other facets of them (roy being artistic, Edward fencing!). Their relationship is a sweet, slow burn and if you decide on a sequel I'll be one of the first :) bravo!