Reviews for Believe In Me
Anonymous Person chapter 11 . 9/18/2020
You know what I think would be scary to contemplate? What would be necessary to break the trust Mustang had with his team and Edward. This chapter and a previous one had two instances which really stuck out to me, Riza offering to lend Roy her gun and Roy agreeing to give, what I suspect, was a lot of information about flame alchemy to Edward. I'm pretty darn sure Riza puts a heck of a lot of care into maintaining her guns and I seriously doubt there are many people she'd lend her gun to. As for flame alchemy, seriously Roy and Riza agreed to literally burn the secrets of it from her back so that no one else could learn flame alchemy. So offering to teach Edward about it, is probably the most obvious way Roy could've used to silently scream I trust you 100 percent. That's not mentioning the fact that it was stated several times that if either his team or Edward says it's the truth, Roy will believe it just like that. The sheer amount of loyalty and trust is astounding. I'm also thinking that most of this would probably apply to Alphonse as well. If they believe that he needs to know the information, he'll get the information no matter if it's technically top secret or not. I think the deciding factor there is relevancy, not whether or not they trust him with the information.
Anonymous Person chapter 10 . 9/18/2020
Welp, after that demonstration I'm pretty sure the only people who'd dare contradict an order from Mustang is gonna be limited to his team, the Elric brothers, and potentially the two Armstrongs. Olivier more than Alex because I get the distinct feeling that not even the title Furher and Flame Alchemist is gonna be enough to cow the Commander of Briggs. That lady is practically the definition of a badass. I feel like there are some more people who might also contradict him, such as Gracia, Maria, Winry, or Pinako, but I think it'd be out of a military setting.
EllaJuroku chapter 28 . 8/10/2018
Can I ask why you made the Panda a pervert? I don't have a problem with it because it's funny as heck!
evergreen-icy chapter 68 . 6/9/2018
Hey, I see Hawkeye forgot something. She should gives Roy a good shoot for dare to doubt Ed before.
Guest chapter 68 . 4/9/2018
Yay! :D Happy ending! I know this is 10 years old (Bet it doesn't seem like that long ago to you though does it?) so im sure there's no chance at a part 2 anymore lol, would have been cool though Part 1 has an awesome ending though, so im happy regardless 3

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! Hard to believe you were doing daily updates on this O.o That must have taken alot of time...

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 61 . 4/9/2018
I was commenting on the last chapter, but it glitched... pretty sure it didn't post any of it? I'll just rewrite it xD

So I started reading around 2:00AM ish (so 7? maybe 8 chapters ago? or has it been alot more?), it's now 7:30AM and the awesomeness has been keeping me awake xD

I want to finish it before going to sleep, so if I start getting tired I'll just go eat a bunch of Easter candy to keep me up.

The dreams... I was actually thinking this whole time Roy was seeing stuff that UlterRoy had seen.

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 60 . 4/9/2018
It's 7:00 AM... Haven't slept yet O.o But the awesomeness of the last... 7 chapters now i think I've binged? Has kept me awake.

I'll just go stuff my face with Easter candy if i start getting tired.
Guest chapter 42 . 4/4/2018
Sorry for the lack of reviews lately O.o I've been so frickin busy the past two weeks...

I normally load in a page on my 3DS before heading to bed, read it, put the 3DS away, then go to sleep xD

Still reading and enjoying though! :3 Hopefully I'll have a bit more time to finish this soon

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 20 . 3/19/2018
woah O.O loved that Chimara fight. i wish that was actually animated... would be totally awesome.

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 17 . 3/18/2018
oh! i forgot to mention, about two or three chapters ago when playing 'Popcorn'... or whatever its called, Roy said 'Llama'. my first though was 'Nitro' xD

rarely do i hear or read the word llama without thinking of Ed's guard llama lol.

most memorable OC ever.

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 16 . 3/18/2018
just a random thing i wanted to say, i pictured Sasori (is that how you spell his name?) from Naruto Shippuden, as the desert assassin xD

remind me to never travel through a desert O.O if Ed is having problems, then im sure i wouldn't last to long...

-ZeyTheFox-
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2018
loved that chase scene! 3 and Ed being bitten made it 100% better x3 (im a sucker for HurtEd)

-ZeyTheFox-
ItStartsWithZ chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
another one of your amazing ficswill you still continue with a sequel for Believe in me? you are one of my favorite authors as you write Ed and Roy sp well (i started with Circa then was a follower ever since
Guest chapter 27 . 9/5/2017
I think that everyone who wants to have/adopt kids needs to take the pervert/pedo test.. Flash around some images of kids all ages at the beach with potential parents hook up to a lie detector and make sure nothing gross happens. Who care about the parents gender not being a pervert is the key factor.
lexieconextreme chapter 68 . 3/10/2017
Aiight. So I've come to the following conclusion.
Because of you, I am now complete Roy/Ed trash.
During weekends, when I should be doing my homework, I can instead be found reading Roy/Ed fanfics. And whose Roy/Ed fanfiction, you may ask?
It would be yours. So thanks so much. I never expected to be trash, I never asked nor wanted to be trash. But here I am. Trash.

And you know the funny thing?
I ain't even mad, bro. IT'S WORTH IT
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