Reviews for the engagement
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Good story haha
Lord Vukodlak chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
There are several glaring grammar/typos errors such as haunt Adora instead of aunt Adora.

Teela had make her choice should be 'made her choice' if you mean the choice has been made.
teefana chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
you've done a very good job,especially since english isn't your language.i liked the ideas a lot-please continue writing.
wildpartyhouse247 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Nice, liked the story and well done for writing it in a second language.

Be brave and write a second version of this with the test, think you'll do well.