Reviews for Sophie's First Time - As OneShot Tester
Alex chapter 2 . 10/15/2019
Omg it’s so weird reading this and thinking you were 16 at the time and now you’re 27. Makes me wonder what your life is like now
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
This stuff is MA. Should not be there on fan fiction.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
Disgusting
Katjie-chan chapter 2 . 1/2/2019
Your 16 year old self did i pretty good job! Really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2018
Wow...just wow
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Umm y'know this content is actually MA not M. Please reread the guidelines. This should be on adult fan not this version. smh why just why some people choose to do this.
UnbreakableRose chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
Ahh, this was so good!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
That actually was fantastic, good job.
catspats31 chapter 1 . 1/10/2018
While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Please remove every detailed description of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted like AdultFanfiction.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2017
You have to do one they pregnant
MakorraForever chapter 2 . 7/15/2016
This was so good and is just what I was looking for!
Josephine chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
This is the most detailed lemon I've ever read. And it contains two of my favorite characters from Studio Ghibli too!
Mello chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
I just watched howl's moving castle a few nights ago and I've been looking fanfics, djs and fanart ever since. Honestly, I've never read a fanfic so good! I loved the amount of descriptions you used that other people usually don't. And usually when I read these, everyone sounds like stereotypical white girls -w- but this one was totally different. You captured their personality so well. Thank you for writing this!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
This can't be your first lemon. This is SO AMAZING! I can't believe how good this was. You're a natural. Loved it. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2015
It was good
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