|Reviews for RainbowHearted Cuts|
| Sams Taz chapter 4 . 12/12/2011
Uh oh! Poor Jeff! I just have to say that. What a tough beginning for a relationship if they can get it all worked out!
Loving this story!
| Sams Taz chapter 3 . 12/12/2011
I am going to Hazard a guess that it is Randy. *sigh* I hate that he cuts himself! I have heard it explained that way before fro a good friend of mine who used to cut. He said that to him it was better to feel the pain on the outside than the inside. I never knew that he cut because he didn't use his arms. I walked into his room one day and caught him doing it. The worst part about it is he thought that I would shun him and walk out of his life. That so was not the case, it just killed me to see him that way!
| Sams Taz chapter 2 . 12/12/2011
Ok I feel for the man! That would have thrown me off kilter too. Yeah and running away at that point in time would have been what I did too! sheesh talk about not expecting what happened!
I love that he has a best friend who can help make him feel better! That is what good friends do!
BLOOD LOSS? No!
| Sams Taz chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Oh no poor Jeff! I would have had a heart attack as well if the person I liked came that close to me and touched my face! Great start!
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 6 . 7/2/2011
"a gay fairytale look at Snow White and the 7 dwarfs. Now that is Homo."
Oh my gosh, I was just thinking this a few hours before I read your story and you actually wrote it, too! Wow, you read my mind five years before we even met. You're good. Very good.
This chapter was amazingly hot. I'll never see showers the same way again. Mmm...smelly soap. I love smelly soap. My older sister hates anything that is scented so I have an addiction to smelly soap for fear she will take it from me!
You mentioned Jeff lost his virginity to a cute art boy in high school with dimples...*cough* New Kid on the Jock *cough* it's funny 'cause you wrote this way before my story and I didn't read this until after I had the dream that brought my story to life. So, I guess we really do have ESPN and ESPN2. There's documented proof.
Wait, it's over? NOOOO! Lol, Now I'll have to move on to more...
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 5 . 7/2/2011
"Yesturday I fucked Randy and cried"
I could totally picture all of Randy's real-life former lovers, as well as all of his fanfic exploits saying this. Huh.
Cena was pissy. Heh, I like when Cena's like that.
Oh, phone fight! I love it because people always say crazy ass things when they're pissed on the phone.
Randy with a journal. I'd say that wasn't like him, but if he's on the road all the time, he probably does have a notebook or something to jot down thoughts and random stuff. I'd suppose he's not a diary guy. Diaries are private and usually locked, and Sam would have seen the KEEP OUT message scribbled in front in big bold red letters and she wouldn't have read it! So there!
I have one of those password journals that you're supposed to speak the password into and it recognizes your voice and unlocks. Turns out it's a cheap device and it hardly ever recognizes my voice. Haven't been able to get into it for six years. I should just break the damn thing.
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 4 . 7/2/2011
Oh. Em. Gee.
So much hotness. It hurts me because it's so good. Ow. Oh. Ow.
Again, you surprised me by making Jeff the top! I was totally thinking Randy would be the one to take charge, but I like that he didn't.
All this wrongness makes everything even hotter. I swear, all sex scenes should have the "it's so good but it's so wrong" element. The whole "I can have you, it's cool" is just not enough to supply the hotness for very long.
Huh. Just realized I said hot a lot in this review. Not my intention. But yeah, it was. Hot, that is.
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Mmmm...Candice with her top off...I mean uh, OMG, Candice! Don't be a hooch! Lol, I miss Candice and her perfect bazzongas. I've never quite seen a chest like hers. It looked so awesome, I thought it was some kind of wrestling CGI.
I like that your stories surprise me and take very twisted turns. Jeff's whole cutting scene was both unexpected and very true to life. You made him imperfect (OMG, the flamers are gonna be SO pissed)!
ANOTHER cliffhanger ending? Dude. You make me feel like an addict. One more chapter, just one more...cliffhanger? NO! One more, just one more...
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
NO, JEFF! DON'T RUN AWAY! DON'T FIGHT IT! I was totally saying this out loud at the end of the chapter. *is an uber-dork*
I'm sad that Jeff ran away. A super hot shower scene with super hot guys all naked and wet and making out, and Jeff runs away? Come on!
Lol, I remember when John and Maria were together on the show a lot and they made a good pair, so the whole dating thing made me all, "Yeah!"
I always feel awkward making the guys cry in my fics because I always think people are gonna be like, "WTF? Wrestlers don't cry!" and if the wrestlers ever actually saw our work, I could see them being like, "Well, the rest of it was hot, but the whole crying thing? No way!"
| Punk Drunk Love chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
"Whatever god in heaven that watched over me really hated me."
*printed this phrase out, brought it to Kinkos, had it copied onto a banner; pasted it on my ceiling so I can look at it regularly*
Seriously. Best phrase ever.
I super like this story. Not like, I said SUPER like. That's a biggie for me. I have some morbid curiosity about the ever-defiant Jeff Hardy and it's almost sad really, because he is totally unreliable and like, the River Phoenix of the wrestling world (brilliant but doesn't see his own greatness and will most likely die in a horrible self-induced tragedy near something owned by Johnny Depp), yet I still get excited when he decides to show up and I find his personality amazingly attractive.
And you already know how I feel about Randy (I hate his guts, that's why he's all over my bedroom wall and all over my stories and all over my computer and all over my...oh...sorry), so blending the two is just hotness.
Jeff sounds like me. Eating granola and acting like a five-year-old in front of hot people. I'd have the chocolate on my face, too, but Randy would probably just give me a weird look and walk away, and I'd be thinking to myself, "Was it something I said?"
So. Liking this. Will be reading more. I'm also apologetic that I haven't read more sooner, and that I've been all pissy at you on Facebook. I was, of course, joking to get your attention, but yeah. Sorries.
Love and Loud Noises,
| Magz86 chapter 6 . 5/27/2010
OMG... Jeff topping Randy... *twitches and drools*
Loved the whole story, BTW :)
| MiataCatashi chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Best story ever! You put the other Jeff/Randy stories to a pitiful pile of dust.
| barbiedoll chapter 6 . 12/30/2008
Hey! I've just read this and I adore it! The lovemaking scene is so hot and the sudden twist when Randy confessed that he was gay to Sam. I was wondering why he wanted Jeff so much in the beginning and tried to take Jeff in the shower, and it finally dawned on me that Randy was gay too! Glad everything turned out the way it was supposed to be. Cool fic!
| dj-ssdd chapter 6 . 11/18/2008
that was fucking amazing. even though it was only 6 chapters,i LOVED this fic :D
| Speeding-Kitty chapter 6 . 9/13/2008
*dead* .god! So hot! PLEASE WRTIE MORE RANDY/JEFF! lol. These two are hot together. Love it. Great fic and the last chapter was really well written hehe. Anything that hot is almost always well written. Its just natural lol.