Reviews for Fallen Angel
IFallLikeLeavesAndSnow chapter 10 . 12/14/2009
Curse you no one can really continue a story writin by an author who puts it up for adoption after they have put this much effort into it as good as the original author
WoAiNi edward chapter 9 . 12/4/2008
Hey... Just wanted to say that I'm still waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. Don't feel any pressure to write until you're ready. Just wanted to let you know that I'll wait until you update so this is at least one reader that hasn't lost hope and is still supporting you.

Sim :D With you all the way!
abyssdoor chapter 10 . 11/17/2008
I know it's been a few months, but I assure you that at least one of us readers is still waiting for more of your good job.

Attachment: Virtual Cookies.
dragonfly91 chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
i think its cool keep on writting
nickypooh chapter 9 . 9/19/2008
OMG this story is so good! i mean i cant wait for another're killing me! anyways love the suspence and oh i hope Goten can come back home!
blackstar42 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I loved the story! Sorry you got bored with it though. Please write more.
WoAiNi edward chapter 10 . 8/10/2008
Ah! I'm so sorry that you have no inspiration, but i can't believe that I'l have to wait for several months to find out what happens next! I don't want to sound rude, but i was so into that story! ~sob, sob~
abyssdoor chapter 8 . 8/1/2008
Good, you're advancing the plot. By the way, why must they wait a year to wish him back, when the rule states that after a year, one person cannot be revived?
GingaGiri-Giri chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
(cries) NO GOTEN! WAH. Ok, I'm done. So is it over now! Like, are you starting the sequel now?
PositivelyInsane chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
aw poor goten, he was really cool even if he was killing people it wasn't his fuult! won't his kid be like 3/4 saiyan since he's half and his Zuki is all saiyan, and did you get her name from avatar since there's a girl on that name suki?
Aizou chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
Great chapter, nice tension and a little romance too :)

Action time :D

PositivelyInsane chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
Yay! Zuki escaped and goten and try and get revenge! *yelling happily* I LOVE IT!
GingaGiri-Giri chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
Aizou chapter 6 . 7/21/2008
I like this story and I can't wait to see where it's going.

Goten? Evil? Seems impossible, but somehow you've managed to make it seem plausible as at first he hated killing.

I like your style, keep it up!
Space-Weazel chapter 6 . 7/20/2008
oO Ouch... I feel bad for Goten, he seems to get into bad situations a lot, heh. Nice story, I'm eager for an update!
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