Reviews for Shower Stories
jk chapter 3 . 5/26/2016
yaaa cause jasper...JASPER would be stuttering...scared of Edward? really?
and like jasper needs to be punished...this is total crap. why even fucking bother?

couldn't think of a plot? dumbass
jk chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
you want a review? alright here it is

are the readers supposed to believe that jasper...with his fucking power...couldn't feel another person in that room?
that with his vamp hearing...he didn't know someone was in the bathroom?

this story is pointless and fucking stupid
Godric's Girl Forever chapter 4 . 5/7/2015
I love your story but why did u have to make it where Jasper has to do this don't get me wrong i would LOVE to see Jasper nude but i hate to see him tortured
Alex Aces chapter 8 . 12/2/2013
I would be amused if Bella got turned on and Edward scented it and got pissed
Alex Aces chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
It is very un-bella to not care
Alex Aces chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
Alex Aces chapter 3 . 12/2/2013
Jas only say her head pop out from behind the curtain -.-
Alex Aces chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
Mmm, too short.
Alex Aces chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 2/26/2013
I adore how Edward had this dark side no one knew about. Brilliant, darling, brilliant!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Guest chapter 14 . 1/21/2013
If you threaten me with animals (except dogs) I won't review.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/21/2013
I want the monkeys to attack, so I didn't review. In responce to last chapter-I will spank Jasper.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2013
Bella better not help Jasper!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
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