Reviews for She was Beautiful
bella's beta chapter 12 . 1/30/2012
Great story. It was wonderful
Fleur24 chapter 11 . 1/17/2010
This was so totally cool! I love how Bella's transfermation took less time then normal. I als o rerally love her power!
FantasyFan5813 chapter 11 . 7/8/2009
I like this story, but it's inconsistent. Sometimes one sentence you write is contradicted by the next line. It gets rather confusing. Just something to think about.
CrossMyHeart108 chapter 10 . 6/21/2009
NO! ITS GETTING GOOD
Livingthelife4 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
aw this is nice.
FantasyFan5813 chapter 12 . 5/18/2009
This story moved so fast! It was good though. A few spelling errors, but that can happen to anyone.
BriseisRose chapter 12 . 4/26/2009
That was an awesome story! Definitely going on my favorites! And I can't wait for the sequel (if you're still doing one...i see it was finished last year)! X
Liv007 chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
“Humans are friends, not food!” that was funny. S.M should have put that in the book. haha
KaylaRyan17 chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Oh! She remembers doesn't she? I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
This was GREAT, but you should still do a sequel...you don't have to do the wedding. Just a sequel :)

Loved it though!
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 10 . 4/4/2009
No! I don't want it to end please continue! You don't have to do the wedding, just more please please please!
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 8 . 4/4/2009
No no no no no! Stupid Bella!
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 7 . 4/4/2009
Holy Crap!
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 5 . 4/4/2009
Oh dear! I gotta keep reading!
Cant-get-enough-twilight chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
Ah! Yay yay yay!
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