Reviews for Alchemic Innocence
Elrics and Walker chapter 18 . 4/26
? I just read it and:
1) tried not to die laughing
2)tried not to fall of bed laughing
3)nearly cried when I noticed how long it's been
Giou Yomi chapter 14 . 2/11
GREAT story, but I feel like I need to point out that in this chapter, you reffered to the ark as the ark, but they shouldn't know that fact, right?
thulium86 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
"What's a DGM?" asked the strange boy as he played with his pony figurines.
"I'll tell you when you're older and not as dumb" said the boy's mum, he thinks.
incarnate of evil chapter 18 . 4/3/2014
This is good, I'm glad you are starting to go your own direction a bit. I hope you are going to update this, it is not a good ending! :)
incarnate of evil chapter 16 . 4/2/2014
I have been enjoying this so far, but I'm surprised no one has mentioned Ed being referred to as a Colonel yet. Also wondering if Envy will bring up the brother bit as he likes to cause issues.
Also a criticism, why are you bothering to do the filler episodes when you are almost changing nothing?
Any way on to the next chapter! :)
Sleepybutterfree chapter 18 . 2/13/2014
update... please.. ;-; this is so great.. i wanna read...
BDWD chapter 18 . 2/10/2014
The last time you updated was about 6 YEARS AGO!, you're really not goanna update are you?...

And you made this story 7 YEARS AGO! 7!
...there really is no updating this, huh?...

(2008)-Year Made (2009)-Last Update (2014)-Our Year (2013)-Last Year That I Review This

P.S. : It's me Black Devil White Demon, I'm doing it like this cause I'm only allow too review once.
coolfic chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
I will be completely honest, I got a little bored during the middle (especially the stuff with komourin), but the plot is really starting to pick up now! I find myself totally looking forward to the next chapter, but was this dropped by any chance? I hope not:(. Im really looking forward to Ed doing some more amazing alchemy, and for Ed and Als secret to sort of be revealed! Hope you keep writing this!:)
BlackDevil WhiteDemon chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
The last time you updated was about 5 YEARS AGO!, that long...

And you made this story 6 YEARS AGO!
...your not gonna update, are you?...

(2008) -Year Made (2009)-Last Update (2013)-Our Year
Infinities Lover chapter 18 . 11/27/2013
LOL LOVE THIS! It's been a while but PLEASE UPDATE! I BEG YOU! This is amazing!
GloomyMercury98 chapter 18 . 8/25/2013
Oh come on! Why you no write more!?
lc3 chapter 18 . 7/12/2013
LOL Riza is so awesome. Are you ever gonna update? *shot*
lc3 chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
Well Ed and Al can just alchemy the octopus off though.
lc3 chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
TROLOLOLOL. Awww shucks you making me miss Hughes again.
lc3 chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
I beg to differ too... I think Ed is more awsome. *shot*
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