|Reviews for Alchemic Innocence|
| Elrics and Walker chapter 18 . 4/26
? I just read it and:
1) tried not to die laughing
2)tried not to fall of bed laughing
3)nearly cried when I noticed how long it's been
| Giou Yomi chapter 14 . 2/11
GREAT story, but I feel like I need to point out that in this chapter, you reffered to the ark as the ark, but they shouldn't know that fact, right?
| thulium86 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
"What's a DGM?" asked the strange boy as he played with his pony figurines.
"I'll tell you when you're older and not as dumb" said the boy's mum, he thinks.
| incarnate of evil chapter 18 . 4/3/2014
This is good, I'm glad you are starting to go your own direction a bit. I hope you are going to update this, it is not a good ending! :)
| incarnate of evil chapter 16 . 4/2/2014
I have been enjoying this so far, but I'm surprised no one has mentioned Ed being referred to as a Colonel yet. Also wondering if Envy will bring up the brother bit as he likes to cause issues.
Also a criticism, why are you bothering to do the filler episodes when you are almost changing nothing?
Any way on to the next chapter! :)
| Sleepybutterfree chapter 18 . 2/13/2014
update... please.. ;-; this is so great.. i wanna read...
| BDWD chapter 18 . 2/10/2014
The last time you updated was about 6 YEARS AGO!
...wow, you're really not goanna update are you?...
And you made this story 7 YEARS AGO! 7!
...there really is no updating this, huh?...
(2008)-Year Made (2009)-Last Update (2014)-Our Year (2013)-Last Year That I Review This
P.S. : It's me Black Devil White Demon, I'm doing it like this cause I'm only allow too review once.
| coolfic chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
I will be completely honest, I got a little bored during the middle (especially the stuff with komourin), but the plot is really starting to pick up now! I find myself totally looking forward to the next chapter, but was this dropped by any chance? I hope not:(. Im really looking forward to Ed doing some more amazing alchemy, and for Ed and Als secret to sort of be revealed! Hope you keep writing this!:)
| BlackDevil WhiteDemon chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
The last time you updated was about 5 YEARS AGO!
...wow, that long...
And you made this story 6 YEARS AGO!
...your not gonna update, are you?...
(2008) -Year Made (2009)-Last Update (2013)-Our Year
| Infinities Lover chapter 18 . 11/27/2013
LOL LOVE THIS! It's been a while but PLEASE UPDATE! I BEG YOU! This is amazing!
| GloomyMercury98 chapter 18 . 8/25/2013
Oh come on! Why you no write more!?
| lc3 chapter 18 . 7/12/2013
LOL Riza is so awesome. Are you ever gonna update? *shot*
| lc3 chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
Well Ed and Al can just alchemy the octopus off though.
| lc3 chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
TROLOLOLOL. Awww shucks you making me miss Hughes again.
| lc3 chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
I beg to differ too... I think Ed is more awsome. *shot*