|Reviews for Surprise, I Love You|
| rosesnlilies chapter 1 . 6/27
I actually really enjoyed the dialogue only.:)
It was a bit confusing at times, I have to admit, but I still found my way back and enjoyed it a lot.:)
| allwaswell17 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
DAWWWWW THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE
| ThinkingSpeck chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Cute. I don't have a whole lot to say about this, except that I think it works well.
| Alice chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Awww... It's so cute! Can I translate it into Russian, please?
| Mlle Millie chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
I love one shot with dialogues and Jily' stories so... Loved yours too!
| LunaNotLoony chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Yay! This is awesome, and the dialogue works well... and I love the last line.
| Niffler81 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
| skies-R-Blue chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
aww this is so perfectly lily and jamesish! 3
| FlyingTiger6599 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
i think its awesome
| meltedhappiness chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Cute. I'm rather surprised that I just barely skimmed through this. On stories with enormous 10 line paragraphs, I read word for word and this with few, simple words, I could hardly read. I possibly just wanted to know what happened at the end, but I'm going to go with I don't like this format. I guess I liek descriptive words, but just not too many. My opinion, but great way for a story and will always love this ship and this plot!:)
| OverTheRainbow chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
love it. i just happened to be listening to the song Iris while reading this. ITS SOO CUTE.
| Mellanie Black chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
You wanted it so much, that I didn't see a way not to do it..
So, here it is...
I really liked it, the dialogue form, although I actually think it all happened too fast...But I can't see a way it wouldn't happen fast without be boring, so...
| hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
“Because then…then things would be different. And you’d make me deliriously happy, and this is wartime- and I shouldn’t be so happy!”
| quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I love pure dialogue, and your mix of humor and romance.
| Prongs is mine chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
i thought it was written really well, and i really liked how you wrote it in just dialogue