Reviews for Threesome and Then Some
nattylovesu chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
This was so sweet an so s1...thanks ;ladies!
shirts47 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Hey

Great story, long live

AURLCO

Love JJ
lozzie84 chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
welcome back writers pulse! you will have to keep coming back now that you have set the precident! well done guys
BlueAngel137 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
This is such a sweet story, very well done you three! It made my (gray and rainy) Friday.

Favorite parts:

-...Logan wasn’t getting any attention at all with this “threesome,” but it was alright. One of the best gifts he could have ever gotten was to hear Max laughing ... happy ... safe ... kicked back, warm & dry. At the thought, Logan shifted to peek over toward the other room again, but this time his angel glanced up, catching him out of the corner of her eye as he looked her way...

Busted! He reddened, knowing that somehow she’d know he’d been peering in all along. But without the others seeing, Max showed Logan a small smile of happy appreciation before turning back to laugh with her friends...

(This is such a perfect moment you caught here, absolutely love it!)

-...The moonlight was shining through his windows, illuminating it enough that Max had no trouble discerning Logan’s sleeping form. Without his glasses, with his features relaxed in sleep, he looked softer somehow, as though his defensive barriers had been lowered and he was more himself that she had ever seen him before. ...

(beautiful picture you've drawn here, made me smile)

-...This cliché was nothing new for Logan, who over the years had experienced that there was some truth to it. Brightly illuminated morning afters with a threesome of chatty females, however, who seemingly overnight had discovered some obscure new quality about him, were too much for Logan to handle on an empty stomach. ...

(made me grin - poor Logan!)

-...And just before the door closed behind Max, Logan managed to catch her eyes, succeeding to wipe that flustered nervousness from her face as he mouthed the magic formula of ‘Dinner at eight’…

(perfect ending!)

THANKS!
aa chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
great storya
Princess456 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
that was so great :D
latenightrain chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
What a nice surprise. Just delicious

"The vague impression of having missed something important was only intensified by the fact that the perfectly natural comfort of the last night had yielded to a certain stiffness now that the sun had come out to melt the icy threats of the last night into harmless slush." Love this line. Thanks for this.
Aurora2424 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
This is such a fun, delightful story. It's a joy to read, and may I add, did much more than just rip Logan's shirt off.

The banter of the three women draws the reader in, and Logan's delight at their antics seems genuine and encourages the reader to laugh along. I really like it when authors explore the way Max adds joy to Logan's life - it seems like something that always underlied their interactions, but was rarely explicitedly explored.

By the way “Quiet like a cat, you mean,” Max corrected, “’Quiet as a mouse’ is a stupid analogy; Mice are squeaky. You can always hear them in the walls and stuff.” - Very cute.

May I hope that their will be more chapters to this fun story? I can't help but hope good one shots get expanded on!
annie200 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
This was great. Poor Logan, he was so outflanked!
jfg207 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Oh wow! He didn't feel a thing? My hubby feels when I'm meddling... :) And I'm trying not to wake him... yet...

You've got to go on and see if Max confesses to um, where her hand was... because if I know OC, well, let's just say, she going to push Max to admit she had feeling for the feel she got...